My finger tips are numb from defeat
There’s blood on everything,
Watch me slowly as I fade
Into something evil
Maybe tomorrow, not on this day..
Watch as the womb I will eat
As something evil creeps Into the darkness =-=
It..Needed to be stopped..
A disease that flows strong
Not even a real man can top..
Stand on our battleground
Kneel and pray AS I smash You down..
Sunlight in your hair,
Cutting myself of all things that bind myself of you
I heard you cry. And that’s why we felt it Die..
I heard you scream So delicate, so desirable
It wasn’t a dream
I felt you cry on the inside that night,
A certain kind of passion
No other man will feel..
Not even in the face of deceit..
Will he ever see the real you
I felt it die,This love inside
Fades away..To a new place I could wish to find
This haunting will linger This mourning, it will stay..
I felt it die Again
In the darkest of places
I suggest you can make this as your first hub under Poetry category.
Welcome to hubpages!
Beautiful and deep. I look forward to your next posting. I love poetry and yours was really touching.
I agree with all other hubbers beautiful, deep and make it your first hub. Welcome to HP:)
I agree with Tina. You're "wasting" it the forums. Post your poetry in a hub. More people will be able to find it because of the categories, etc.
I welcome you to HubPages too!
I too concur with KCC and Tina make some hubs you have a lot to let out and you're good at it.
This really should be your first hub -- very powerful, drawing the reader in. Welcome to the hubbing community!
Everyone thank you so very much. I appreciate your words and the info./help.
I feel such depth and despair from this reading. You are a worthy human being deserving of love and health. May God bless you always, be with you and guide you in your journey!
I like the words, and the way they're put.
But I don't understand what you're talking about.
I'd like to know.
Well, when I was growing up I had not alot of things I felt no love. I grew, came to Arizona and I met a women with a lil' son that took me for granted and took it all away. You ever felt so great about something than it was ripped from you?
thanks for explaining.
the poem is beautiful!
I'm Xtasis as well .
Hi Dom, Welcome to Hubpages.
I read your poem and could feel and see in your words how you would have felt being let down so badly that it took everything away from you. I felt your pain and despair. You are a gifted poet. I have written some poetry myself, nothing terrific, as I am not a writer but a singer. I too have had despair in my life and I know how it feels to be let down so badly that you feel your life if over, but you soon realise that it is not the end of the world, pick yourself back up and get on with life again. I think this is a good start for you on Hubpages. I would be pleased for your opinion on my attempt at lyrical poetry. I look forward to seeing more of your poems. God Bless BB
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