The Tasty Breakfast by bhattuc

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   Jodahposted 3 years ago

   Read Umesh's excellent story in response to Brenda's "breakfast" word prompt.
   https://hubpages.com/literature/The-Tas … -challenge

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Excellent response Umesh ji.
      Husbands may not be expressive, but they do understand. Time is usually their constraint.
      Your story beautifully depicts the understanding between the husband and the wife.
      Thank you John, for sharing this wonderful post.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for sharing this one John.
      
      Umesh
      In your story you tell us about a busy executive named Dave who expects his wife Rezi to tend to all the household chores.
      
      When she is ill & cannot fix breakfast for him, he finally pitches in by making her breakfast and leaving it on the table  with a note.
      
      Too bad he didn't bring it to her in bed so it could still be hot, but I'm glad to see he is finally understanding that with love, everything is a two-way street.
      
      When you truly care about another person, you will do anything for them.
      
      Interesting story about how even something so simple like breakfast can make a huge difference on one's outlook.
      
      I'll post a link in the word prompt article .

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Thanks John for sharing and thanks Chitrangada for the detailed and valuable comment.

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Sir, It was very interesting and beautiful story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your wonderful response to Brenda's word prompt 'breakfast'. Thank you so much for sharing.
   
   John, thank you so much for posting this discussion
   
   Blessings always!!

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Thanks Brenda for your critical review. You are always a kind soul. Blessings.

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Misbah, feel happy that you spared time to go through this story. Thanks a lot for your sweet encouraging words. Have a nice day.

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      vidsagsterposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Beautiful story by Umesh. A great response to Brenda's word prompt. Small gestures prove a one's love for their partner, like preparing breakfast. You have brought out the aspect of true love very well in the poem Umesh. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks John for sharing.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Vidya
         You are right.
         
         Its with true love that we cater to others when they are ill.

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Vidsagster, thanks for going through and the nice observation. Have a nice day.

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   vidsagsterposted 3 years ago

   Thanks Brenda. Lucky people find such true love. And it is quite rare too.

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   That is a sweet story by Umesh.  Sometimes small gestures are the most appreciated. Thanks for sharing it John.

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