In Anticipation of a Second Chance

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   Rosina has written a very good story that is a response to Brenda Arledge's 51st word prompt. Irt is well worth taking the time to read this story.
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/In-Anti … ond-Chance

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Rosina!
      Nice response to the word prompt, Chance. I liked reading your story, and that you ended it on a hopeful and optimistic note.
      Good of you to combine two prompts in one story. Well done! Thank you.
      I was about to share your story, but then I noticed that Pamela has already shared it. Thank you Pamela.
      My best wishes to both of you.

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         surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you, Chitrangada, for enjoying my story. I appreciate your generous and meaningful comments. I am glad you wanted to share my story as well. Have a beautiful, enjoyable day!

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   Rosina, this is a very good story, and I enjoyed reading it. I like the ending as we think everything is fine for Rosina, but we do not know for sure. This is an excellent response to Brenda's and Moe Wood’s prompt.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Pamela, for sharing the link to my story and the sweet and generous comments. I really apprectiate that. I am delighted that you like my story.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 3 years ago

   Hi, Rosina. Just read your story. Wonderful response to Brenda's word prompt, chance.
   I enjoyed reading. Great work. Keep it up.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Rozlin, for reading my story. I am happy you like it and enjoyed reading it. Thumbs up!

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   I especially liked how you started the story with that sudden accident.  You are becoming a good story-teller.  Thanks Pamela for sharing Rosina's story with us.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the generous comment, Peggy. Hopefully, you enjoyed the story. Gratitude for reading and commenting. Have a wonderful and joyful day.

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   Jodahposted 3 years ago

   A nice story, Rosina. You did well to combine two prompts in one story. Good job.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I am happy, John, you like my idea of combining two prompts in one story. Thank you for your kind words. Have a good night.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Rosina
   Your short story "In Anticipation of a Second Chance" is quite good.
   
   It shows us how one can overcome obstacles.
   Not letting anything destroy his chances.
   
   It clearly shows us how not to panic when events don't play out in our lives the way we hope.
   
   Have faith that putting your best foot forward with honesty & integrity will open new doors.
   
   A second chance will always be waiting.
   
   I love how you set the scene for this story.   
   No doubt she was nervous, which possibly caused her to spill her coffee.
   
   Yet she remained calm in the face of this setback & was determined to get a second chance.
   
   Great write.
   
   I'll post a link in the word prompt article.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      No one can summarize a poem or story based on your prompts better than you. I am quite happy the way you analyzed my story. It is a good and honest review. I liked it a ton. Thank you, Brenda, for your time and efforts. I really appreciate it.

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         surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Will she get a second chance? Read on to find out.

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Rosina, I enjoyed reading your very well written and beautiful story in response to Brenda's word prompt, 'Chance'. I liked that you combined two prompts in one story... Excellent work!! Thanks for sharing.
   
   Thank you so much, Di, for sharing the link to Rosina's hub.
   
   Take care and stay healthy.
   Blessings and Love as always!!

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Misbah, for enjoying my story. I am happy you liked the idea of combining the two prompts. I felt by doing so, my muse could weave a good story. I appreciate your comments.
      
      Love and blessings to you too!
      Take care!

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   Ankita Bposted 3 years ago

   I enjoyed reading your story, Rosina. You did a great job by combining the two prompts together. Thank you for sharing.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I m delighted, Ankita, that you enjoyed the story. I am glad you like the idea about how I created the story. Your comments are very much appreciated. May God bless you!

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   ravirajan01posted 3 years ago

   Wonderful story Rosina.This story is a great response to Brenda's prompt and the characters are well fleshed out.Thanks for writing.One question did Thomas respond to the mail ?
   
   Thanks for sharing Pamela

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Ravi, I am glad you like the story and are curious about the ending. I was one of their valued and productive employees. Naturally, Thomas forgave and gave me a second chance.

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    vidsagsterposted 3 years ago

    Beautiful story Rosina. A perfect response to both Brenda's word prompt and Moe Wood's short story' writing challenge. I enjoyed reading your story. Now we are intrigued to know about her boss's response. Eagerly waiting for your next short story. Thanks for sharing Pamela.

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       surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

       Thank you, Vidya, for enjoying the story. There is, however, no continuation of the story, and I leave the Boss's response to your imagination. This may be a bit disappointing but that is how it is. Gratitude for reading and commenting.

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