Rozlin Mohsin ~ Come Home Soon

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 12 months ago

   Rozlin writes a poem about how we often think ofvthe ones we love throughout the day.
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Come-Home-Soon-A-Poem

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hello Rozlin!
      I can relate to this, and I am sure this happens in every home.
      You have captured the sentiments beautifully. Life is beautiful with these small pleasures. God bless you.
      Thank you for sharing.

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         RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

         Hi, Chitra di. Your encouraging words made me smile. I am glad you liked my work. Thank you for reading and leaving those encouraging words.
         Take care.
         Blessings and lots of love!

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 12 months ago

   Rozlin...
   When we are truly in a relationship of love we think this way.
   It's a great feeling to see them walk through the door.
   
   Better yet...if they think that way during the day also.

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      RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, Brenda. Thank you for reading and sharing a link to my hub. Much appreciated. I agree, if that person thinks the same for you, that's great too.
      Blessings and Much love

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   Gianella Labradorposted 12 months ago

   Its great coming home with someone waiting for you and for someone that's always happy to see you be back home every time. Lovely piece that's really relatable.

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      RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, Gianella. Glad to know you found my piece of work, lovely. Thank you for taking time to read and comment. I appreciate that.
      Blessings and lots of love.

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      Olealeaposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      I hope that's is true.  The world is a much more beautiful place if if stay with the people we love

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         RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you, Grace for reading my hub and leaving a comment. Much appreciated.

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   PurvisBobbi44posted 12 months ago

   A beautiful thought and a very missed event when that person or animal is no longer there to greet you. Then, you find someone or another pet to love---life is too short to be alone. I loved the poem--it awaken my cool heart and made me more thankful for what I do have--not what I did have.
   
   Bobbi Purvis

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      RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Purvis for taking time to read and comment. I am pleased to know you loved my poem and are grateful to what you have. Take care.
      Blessings and Much love!

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   Pamela99posted 12 months ago

   This poem tells us how we miss someone we love when they are away. I really enjoyed reading your poem Rozlin. It is very good.
   
   Thanks for posting Rozlin's poem Brenda.

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   vidsagsterposted 12 months ago

   A beautiful poem Rozlin. It is indeed the ritual followed in every home. When a loved one leaves either for work or study, the spouse or parent bids adieu with the words, be safe and come home soon. It is very much observed in this part of the world. It conveys a sense of belonging, love and care. thanks Brenda for sharing.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 12 months ago

   Hi, Pamela. Thank you for reading my hub and those encouraging comment. i am glad you enjoyed reading my poem and considered it good.
   Blessings and Lots of Love!

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   RozlinMohsinposted 12 months ago

   Hi, Vidya. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting with those generous, encouraging words. I am happy you considered the poem, beautiful. yes, its indeed ritual followed in every home. I too follow it.
   Take care.
   Blessings and Much Love.

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   MsDoraposted 12 months ago

   Now, there's a bond,  when one person is to another what the beat is to the heart. Awesome! Thanks for sharing.

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    RozlinMohsinposted 12 months ago

    Thank you MsDora for reading and commenting with those generous words. I am glad you liked it.
    Blessings and Much Love.

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    Misbah786posted 12 months ago

    Rozlin, this is such a delightful poem. I reeeeally lovvveeed it. Yes, we say these beautiful words almost every day "Aaj jaldi ghar aana" (come back home early today)
    You have written it very beautifully. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem.
    
    Thank you, Bredz, for sharing Rozlin's work
    
    Blessings and lots of Love to you both!!

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    Jodahposted 12 months ago

    Nice work, Rozlin. Thank you for sharing this popular saying, and for the poem describing it. We all miss our love ones when they are away and want them to return home soon and safely.
    Thanks for sharing, Brenda.

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    surovi99posted 12 months ago

    Hi Rozlin, this is a very cute poem you have composed, waiting for the loved one to come home soon. I enjoyed reading it and loved it thoroughly. Thank you for sharing.
    
    Thanks Brenda for sharing Rozlin's post.

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       RozlinMohsinposted 12 months agoin reply to this

       Rosina, I am glad you found my poem, cute and enjoyed reading. Thank you for taking time to read and leaving those generous words. Take care dear sister.
       Blessings and Much Love.

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    RozlinMohsinposted 12 months ago

    Misbah, I am glad you loved my poem and considered it beautiful. Thank you for those warm encouraging words. I am delighted. Take care.
    Blessings and lots of love.

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    RozlinMohsinposted 12 months ago

    Thank you, John for reading my work and leaving those generous words. I am pleased.
    Blessings always!

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