I Am Stuck in the Middle of My Story by Misbah

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   This is a wonderful and touching poem.
   https://hubpages.com/literature/I-Am-St … f-My-Story
   
   Misbah, I love your well-written and heartfelt poem. The two quotes at the end are wonderful as well, and so true. You are already doing good deeds on this Earth.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You are so kind, John. Thank you so much for sharing and for your kind words. Much Gratitude!
      
      Have a great day, and keep smiling.
      
      Bundles of Blessings to you!!

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Very heart felt poem Misbah.I loved the sincerity and the quotes that added value to the verses.Thanks for sharing.
   
   THanks for sharing JOhn

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment, Ravi.I am glad you liked it.
      Take care and stay healthy 
      Blessings to you!

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   billybucposted 2 years ago

   I can always count on Misbah to provide heartfelt passion and believability in her work.  Her love of life, her love of others, always shine through in her works.  Bravo!

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Wow! What a lovely surprise, Mr. Bill.
      You are a wonderful friend, and I am humbled by your generosity. Your kindness is always greatly appreciated. I'm super happy to see you here. Thank you for all your love and support. It means a lot to me!
      
      Take care and keep smiling
      Blessings and love to you and your family!

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   This is a very touching and well-composed poem. And I loved the quotes. It's true God created us and to Him we shall return. Thank you for sharing your superb article with us, Misbah.
   
   Thank you, John, for sharing this one.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Rosina, thank you so much for reading and leaving a lovely remark. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      Have a wonderful day and stay well.
      Love and blessings as always

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Misbah...
   Thank you so much for putting these thoughts into words.
   
   There is so much pain that goes along with loss.
   
   Those constant thoughts & wanting to hide away so others don't see your pain.
   
   The feeling of not wanting to go on Alone...
   But that light...it shined in your room.
   
   It brought you a beautiful message.   We all are indeed brought here on our own...i wonder what the journey was like.
   
   In any case.  We need to feel blessed that we were allowed to share in someone else's joy...to be a part of something for awhile.
   
   In the end...we leave alone.
     Though it would be nice to have a hand to hold...
   But if we trust in God...
   Our eternity is waiting for us 
   
   Great work.
   
   Thanks for sharing John

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Bredz, you are right. I agree with all you said. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a great comment. I'm glad you liked it.
      Have a wonderful day, and stay strong, my friend.
      May God continue to bless you!
      Hugs and Blessings!

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks Misbah!
         
         It is really a touching piece.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Misbah has certainly created a heartfelt poem, as others have said. The nature of death is an important topic for all of us, since we can’t avoid it. I enjoyed reading Misbah’s poem and her thoughts about loss and death very much.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You are so kind, Linda. I always appreciate your kind and generous comments on my work. I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment and continuous support. It means the world to me.
      Take care and have a beautiful day.
      Lots of Love and Blessings!

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Hello Misbah!
   Beautiful and expressive and I am sure, it’s relatable to many, who have suffered the loss of their dear ones. Things can’t be the same as earlier, even if we try hard. It’s always in the mind, as we proceed and adjust with our lives.
   Thank you for sharing this heartfelt post.
   Thank you John for highlighting this in the forum.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello, Di. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an insightful remark. I'm delighted you found it beautiful and expressive. How fascinating it is that the language of love and pain is the same all around the world.
      
      Take care and have a beautiful day.
      Bundles of Blessings and Love!

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   I agree with John that is this a very touching and wonderful poem, Misbah. The emotion in this poem was amazing. I loved the quotes also.
   Much Love and Many Blessings.
   
   Thank you John for posting Misbah's poem, John.

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   MsDoraposted 2 years ago

   So soulful and emotional. The sentiments in this poem connects the reader to the heavy burden of grief. Sharing the burden is helpful. Thanks, Misbah. Thanks, John.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Wow! Thank you so much, Ms. Dora, for reading and the very beautiful comment. You are incredibly kind.
      
      Keep smiling and stay healthy
      Have a fabulous day and a wonderful week ahead.
      Much Love and Blessings!

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    Peggy Wposted 14 months ago

    Hi Misbah,
    
    Your poem about missing a dear departed person is something to which almost everyone can relate.  We must bide our time until it is our turn to leave this life and be reunited in eternity.  Grieving is hard work.  I also loved the quotes. 
    Thanks John for sharing her work with us.  This was written long ago, but the subject matter is evergreen.

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       Jodahposted 14 months agoin reply to this

       My pleasure for sharing this, Peg. Thank you for reading and commenting.

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