Wired, Poem by Farah N Haq

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Please take some time to read this beautifully expressed poem by Farah
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Wired

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Hi Farah!
   Beautifully composed poem, and quite expressive. Sometimes, the wires are not visible too. Nice of you to conclude on a positive note. I like that little corner— so calm and peaceful.
   Thank you for sharing.

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   Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

   Thank you so much, dear ChitrangadaSharan, for sharing my poem. I am happy to know you found it expressive and also to know that you liked my little corner. It’s nothing too fancy but I do love to spend some time to myself here. Yes, the daily struggles that we need to put up with are often unseen. I prefer to deal with them this way...Spend some time to relax and then start again. Much love and blessings to you!

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Farah!
      It's a pleasure to share your post-- I am sorry for misspelling your name by mistake!
      It's  actually Huq!

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   Farah, your poetry never disappoints. This one starts off quite dark, as you describe being restrained and becoming even more entangled as you struggle to be free. I am sure most people can relate to things and situations that make them feel this way.
   Having a quiet place to retreat to and be alone often allows us to escape from our troubles and stresses however, just like your little corner. I loved the imagery of the poem.

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   It's good to hear from you after a long time, Farah. I am so glad you have a beautiful little corner to shed off stress, pain and discomfort of the day. In fact, it's a place where you can have some me-time to come back to yourself. That's great. I love the idea. Thank you for sharing.
   
   Thanks Chitrangada for sharing Farah's post.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Experiencing the wires of entrapment is an interesting way to describe the problems of life. The tangled knots can be very frustrating. I hope many people experiencing them find a sanctuary and calmness, as described in the poem. It’s a lovely thought!

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   Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

   Thank you so much, John, once again for your appreciation and wonderful insight into the theme. On a funny note, it’s kind of like my earphone...the more I try to free the knots the more tangled it gets. I don’t even know how it gets so tangled in the first place. Sometimes, I feel, our problems are like that. They appear from nowhere and no matter how much we try to free the knots, they keep getting worse! So once in a while, it’s good to take a break and retreat as you said. We need to recharge our minds as well.

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   Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

   Thank you, dear Surovi! Yes, it’s been some time since I’ve written. Got tangled in several issues that needed my time and attention, but yes, I am working on them. So let’s see. I do try to spend quite a lot of me-time. I just love attending to my thoughts and I do not wish to be bothered by anyone at these moments. This helps me relax. I would love to know what others here do to relax, to untangle from stressful situations. Thank you for the lovely words. My blessings to you, dear.

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   Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

   Thank you so much, dear AliciaC! I am glad to know you found the theme interesting. I believe every person needs a place to retreat. Home is that place in most cases. That’s why we call it “Sweet”. My blessings to you always.

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    Misbah786posted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much, Chitra Di, for sharing Farah's beautiful poem.
    
    Your little corner is beautiful, Farah, and it looks like a serene place. Sometimes we just need some time with ourselves alone. Peace and Blessings to you, my friend.
    Stay well, and keep smiling. You are precious!
    Much Love! ❤️

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    Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

    Dear Misbah, it’s so good to hear from you! Yes, you are precious to me too and so are your words, thoughts and insight into my poem. I am happy to know you liked my little corner and found the poem beautiful. Hope things are great on your end. Much love and blessings to you!

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    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Wonderful Farah. As I read the wires, I could feel the imagery of the words and your verses flowing flawlessly in this beautiful, emotional piece.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
    
    Thanks for sharing Chitrangada

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    vocalcoachposted 2 years ago

    Your poem is right on the money, so to speak. I found sanctuary in your lovely words.  Thank you!

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    Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much, dear Ravi! I am delighted to know you loved the verses. I have come to realize that my thoughts flow only when I experience extreme emotions. I wonder if it is the same for all. I am glad you felt that way. My blessings to you always.

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    Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

    Dear Audrey Hunt, I believe this is the first time I got a comment from you and it makes me truly happy to know that you found the words pleasing. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Looking forward to getting more feedback from you. My blessings to you...

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    MsDoraposted 2 years ago

    What a beautiful ending to a poem that is so relatable. Farah, you made me actually exhale. Chitrangada, thank you for sharing.

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    Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much, dear MsDora, for your appreciation. I am glad you found the ending relatable. I would love to get more feedback from you. My blessings to you.
    And yes, thank you once again, dear Chitradi, for sharing my poem! Much love to you all!

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    Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

    Farah...
    So good to see you & read your words.
    
    Life definitely makes us feel like we are twisted up and tied down in knots.
    To be able to have a special place to go when times trouble us is terrific.
    I love your little corner.
    It looks peaceful.
    
    Asking in prayer is a great way to handle one's problems & then retreating in the quiet.
    
    It is there that we usually find the answers.
    
    Great write.

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    Farah N Huqposted 2 years ago

    Thank you so much, dear Brenda! It is always good to get your lovely feedback and I am so happy to know you liked the poem and my little corner. My garden was a better place of comfort…. But now that it’s almost gone and since I’ve moved to a separate floor, this got to be my new place of retreat. Thank you for your wonderful insight. Please do pray for me and my blessings to you as well.

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