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my trust in you are dying

  1. PTAYLOR9366 profile image53
    PTAYLOR9366posted 8 years ago

    my trust in you are dying
    i told you many of time
    if i found out you lied to me
    i am going to pull back from you
    i told you
    it only take one time
    to lie to me
    my trust in you are dying
    i told you lying and respect
    goes together with me
    i love you
    i do almost anything for you
    i depend on you
    why you have to lie
    to me
    now
    my trust in you are dying

  2. SweetiePie profile image84
    SweetiePieposted 8 years ago

    You should publish your poetry as hubs.  In the forum you are not getting any traffic for this towards you hubscore.

  3. PTAYLOR9366 profile image53
    PTAYLOR9366posted 8 years ago

    how can i do that.because i being trying to

    1. countrywomen profile image60
      countrywomenposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      Welcome to hubpages and happy hubbing big_smile
      Most of the questions would be answered in this FAQ: http://hubpages.com/faq/

  4. Marisa Wright profile image93
    Marisa Wrightposted 8 years ago

    When you sign in to HubPages, on the first page you'll see a big red arrow saying "start a new Hub".  You'll find the same red arrow on your "My Account" page or your "My Profile" page.  Click on that and follow the instructions, and you'll find you've made a Hub.

  5. PTAYLOR9366 profile image53
    PTAYLOR9366posted 8 years ago

    thank u

    1. sukkran profile image60
      sukkranposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      come on ptaylor 9366, we expecting more hubs from you and i hope you will be one of our best hubbers around. take this from me: i am your first member of your fan club! advance greetings for your lovely poetry hubs.
      sukkran

  6. EspianScrolls profile image51
    EspianScrollsposted 8 years ago

    Hey I write Poetry. I was hoping you guys might check it out and let me know how I can improve.

  7. Sufidreamer profile image79
    Sufidreamerposted 8 years ago

    Hi Patricia

    Left a comment on your Hub with a few tips about getting your poetry up there - hope it helps smile

  8. avesh profile image54
    aveshposted 8 years ago

    hey nice poem
    check mine poems in 
    http://hubpages.com/hub/poet_in_love
    all comments are welcome

  9. profile image59
    panah100posted 8 years ago

    Nice Poem. Keep up with the good work. You are obviously talented.

  10. PTAYLOR9366 profile image53
    PTAYLOR9366posted 8 years ago

    thank you

  11. hsofyan profile image55
    hsofyanposted 8 years ago

    I also have the same problem, failed entry poem / poetry. But I want to try again. Hopefully there is way out. Regards.

 
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