I'd like feedback on my article: Natural Treatment for Oligospermia or Low...

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   Ajit jadhavposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Natural Treatment for Oligospermia or Low Sperm Count (must be signed in to view)

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      greenmindposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi. For me the main issue here, aside from shaky grammar and sentence structure, is a lack of medical studies and references to support your claims. On this site, if you assert things that affect the health of other people, you also need to provide sources that are rooted in science and fact.

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      AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Why haven't you removed the Dr. designation from the "About" section of your profile? In another thread, you told me that saying that you were Dr. Ajit was a mistake and that you are really Mr. Ajit. Calling yourself a doctor when you aren't one is misleading, to say the least.

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         Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Mam i am Mr. Ajit Jadhav.
         I am a writer.
         And i write for Dr Amol.
         On some site i published the article by the name dr Amol given a permission.
         But on this site i want my writer profile long term to write for other articles.
         So i want my own account. If there is any thing wrong i am ready to delete all articles along with the account also.
         Is there anything misunderstanding i am really sorry for the change.

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            AliciaCposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Hi, Ajit. I don’t think you need to delete your account, but you do need to clarify the situation because it’s confusing. It’s important that your readers trust what you have said about yourself in your “About” section. The confusion may stop them from doing that. Here are the current problems that I see.
            
            Dr. Amol Bamane has an account on HubPages. He has a different photo from you, but his “About” section is exactly the same as yours except for the name of the writer.
            
            Your “About” section says that you are Dr. Amrit. The title isn’t correct because you aren’t a doctor.
            
            You say that Dr. Amol gave you permission to write articles under his name. This is a problem because he is a doctor and you aren’t.
            
            If Dr. Amol wants to write his own articles on the account with his name, he should do so. If you want to write your own articles, you should do so on the account with your name.

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               Ajit jadhavposted 4 years agoin reply to this

               Yes mam. You are wright.
               I check my profile settings and updat it in next two hours.
               So it will not confuse.

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      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      You need to remove the statement that herbs and natural remedies have no side effects.  I teach growing and using herbs. I constantly caution my students about the side effects of herbs, most of which are debilitating and some are even fatal.

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   psycheskinnerposted 4 years ago

   Hubpages is a US website so they are subject to federal laws that do not allow making curative claims for anything but a licensed drug, and do not allow the use of certain professional titles without the corresponding degree or license.

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   CYong74posted 4 years ago

   Ajit, the problems with this article are the same as those for your cancer article. I'd highlight you again used the word "popular" wrongly in this one.
   
   In addition, I think you have to give the following a thorough think before you post more alternative medicine articles. All of these have already been highlighted
   
   1) Private blogs might be full of them, but major publishers will be very, VERY cautious with such alternative medicine write-ups. Because nobody wants to be sued in the event someone adopts the advice and end up dying from it.
   
   2) When you do not cite internationally certified, peer-reviewed sources for your claim, you will almost immediately be disregarded.
   
   3) Making (2) worse is when you make motherhood statements, such as the one Oldroses pointed out. It implies you have little awareness of medical ethics. It implies you actually do not know the topic. Or both.
   
   4) This whole double identity business with Dr Amol makes everything even more suspect.
   
   With all due respect, unless you understand and address the above areas, it is unlikely any reputable platform will publish your writings.

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