I'd like feedback on my article: Teaching or Sowing Weeds

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  1. Gyanendra Mocktan profile image80
    Gyanendra Mocktanposted 5 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Teaching or  Sowing Weeds (must be signed in to view)

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  2. Rodric29 profile image78
    Rodric29posted 5 years ago

    Gyanendra, I suggest you re-edit this submission. There is much that can be done with the story, but it needs to have unnecessary things removed like redundant sentences. It also starts off too slow. I did not get a what the story was about by reading it from the title. Too much detail about walking and sights to see.

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    1. Gyanendra Mocktan profile image80
      Gyanendra Mocktanposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Rodric29, Thank you for spending your time reading the article and giving me critical feedback.

      I am changing for the best that can have a wider readership. Thank you.

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  3. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

    Your submission reads like an entry in a personal diary not and informative, magazine-style article of the kind HubPages seeks.

    Your English does not reach the near-perfect standard required here. Example:

    Ghantaghar.' the driver said. (There is always a space after punctuation marks(Soon, the bus came to stand still. And I got down.

    'Chha' I said.

    Soon, the bus came to stand still. And I got down. (Sentence is repeated)

    The microbus leaving me on the on the (repetitive) footpath, it turned to the left entering Durbar Marga only to turn right to Ratna Park after a short drive.

    There are several similar errors.

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    1. Gyanendra Mocktan profile image80
      Gyanendra Mocktanposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Rupert Taylor,  Thank you for your feedback.  I am going improve it for the best. Thank you again

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  4. Gyanendra Mocktan profile image80
    Gyanendra Mocktanposted 3 years ago

    Rodric29 and Robert Taylor,

    Thank you very much for your valuable time and words for helping me.

    After 17 months My article has been featured.

    Thank you again.

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