Rozlin Mohsin ~ Being Patient - response to week 44 (patience)

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Rozlin Mohsin's poetry tells us it's hard to be patient, but it makes us stronger in faith.
   
   Good things come to those who wait.
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Being-P … das-Prompt

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Rozlin
   Sorry about the other post not having a link to your work.
   
   I must have been tired.
   
   It's great to see you.
   
   In your poem, "Being Patient" you show us what being patient does for you.
   
   It helps you to accept what you cannot change as your faith in him grows stronger.
   
   It takes you out of your comfort zone & teaches you how to humble & kind.
   
   It's not easy to be patient, but it teaches you to listen to others and be calm.
   
   Your "Acrostic Poem" tells us how patience tests one's behavior as it forces us to use courage to remain silent.
   
   I know my behavior has definitely been tested to the limit where I want to explode.
   
   Your poem, "Patience Look Like" tells us about a person who believes good things come to those who wait.
   So she is patient.  Sitting quietly, waiting for them to unfold.
   
   
   Great writing Rozlin. 
   I try my best to be patient & sit quietly, but sometimes my inner thoughts get the best of me...then I open up my mouth and let words spill out.
   It's never a good picture.
   
   I posted a link in the word prompt article & shared on the newsfeed.
   
   Sorry that it took me s bit longer, but my days are a bit hectic.

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      RozlinMohsinposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      It's all ok, Brenda. I appreciate your time to read and give an encouraging feedback on my work, that too in your busy time. I am pleased to know you liked my response. Thank you for sharing my hub's link with everyone.
      Lots of love and blessings always
      Take care.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Rozlin
         Thanks for understanding.
         Mistakes happen, especially right now.

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Nice work, Rozlin. I enjoyed reading your beautiful poems in response to Brenda's word prompt, 'Patience'. Glad to see you back. I hope you had a nice vacation.
   
   Thank you for sharing
   
   Thank you so much for sharing Rozlin's work with us, Bredz.
   
   Blessings and Love to both of you

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      RozlinMohsinposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Salam, Misbah. It's nice to read your reply after a long time. Yes, I enjoyed my vacation in India and now we are back to UAE, alhumdulillah. I am glad to read you liked my response to Brenda's word prompt.
      Take care, dear sister.
      Blessings and Much Love!!

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   I enjoyed reading your article, Rozlin. It is a good response to Brenda's prompt. I think being patient does make us stronger.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 3 years ago

   Hi, Pamela. Glad to see your feedback. i am pleased you enjoyed reading the article and liked my work on the word prompt. Thanks a lot. Take care.
   Blessings and lots of love.

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      vidsagsterposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      A very good response to Brenda's word prompt Rozlin. I enjoyed reading your poems. Thanks Brenda for sharing Rozlin's  response.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 3 years ago

   Hi, Vidya. Glad to know that you enjoyed reading my poems and liked my response. I enjoyed writing them too.
   Take care, dear friend.
   Blessings and lots of love

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   jansharesposted 3 years ago

   Rozlin, I love your poems. I appreciate how you delve into the internal traits that make up patience and the struggle that comes with it. Excellent work, great meditation on patience.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 3 years ago

   Hi, Janshares. Happy to read your feedback. I too appreciate your time to read my work and the encouraging words. Thank you very much.
   Take care of yourself. Have a great weekend ahead.
   Blessings and Much Love.

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   I enjoyed all 3 of Rozlin's pieces regarding patience.  It does help to make us stronger if we can manage it.  Thanks Brenda for sharing her work with us.

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    RozlinMohsinposted 3 years ago

    Hi, Peggy. Thank you for reading my hub. I'm pleased to know you enjoyed reading all three poems.
    I too enjoyed writing them.
    Take care, dear friend.
    Blessings and much love.

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