Once Upon a Nursery Rhyme - By John

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Please read this wonderful fairy tale-themed poem by John. The poem is a rhyming one, and the flow is almost flawless. Thanks, John, for sharing this wonderful take on the quintessential fairy tales we all love.
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/Once-Up … trels-Code

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Ravi, thank you for sharing this link. I really appreciate your generous comment and am glad you enjoyed this poem.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   John has created an interesting and enjoyable poem. The images match the poem very well. It's going to take some time before the third one leaves my mind! The characters do look like they are searching for a way to pull someone down.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Linda. I am glad you found this poem interesting, as well as the images I included.

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   Loved your fairy-tale themed poetry. And thoroughly loved the message it conveys. The medieval music was fantastic- it fulfilled my curiosity. Thanks for sharing, John.
   
   Thanks, Ravi, for highlighting John's remarkable work.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Rosina, I am glad you loved this poem and its message. I thought including that music was a good touch. Thank you for reading.

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   You fairy tale rhyming poem is a delight to read. I also like the images as they add a visual to the words. The music was interesting too and added to the theme nicely. Well done again, John.
   
   Thank you for posting John's article, Ravi.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello, Pamela. Thank you for reading and enjoying this poem as well as the images and accompanying music video.

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   RozlinMohsinposted 2 years ago

   Lovely fairytale poem, John. Your fluency in making the rhymes is just fantastic. I love reading poems with rhymes. I really enjoyed reading your poerty with rhymes. Thank you for creating this one. I learnt so much from your style of writing.
   
   Thank you, Ravi for sharing.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Rozlin. I appreciate your generous comment, and glad you enjoy rhyming poetry because that is what I most enjoy writing. This poem didn’t start out with every line of each stanza (quatrain) rhyming, but I although it took a lot more work, I reworked it until it did. I am pleased that you learnt something from this style of poem.

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   aesta1posted 2 years ago

   I have always loved minstrels and your poem made me love them even more. Music brings life to the soul so I admire these people just as your rhyme brings music to words.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      What a delightful comment, Mary. I am pleased that my poem even increased your love for minstrels, and yes music does bring life to the soul. Thank you for your kind words.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

   Hello John!
   From a poem on the serious issue of suicide, to this pleasant and fun poem, based on fairy tales— Beautiful creativity, and I appreciate your skills.
   I always enjoy reading your rhymes, which comes naturally to you. By the way, haven’t heard from Lora Hollings since long.
   Thank you Raviji, for sharing this in the forum.
   My best wishes to both of you.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Chitrangada.
      Yes, I needed to write a more light-hearted poem after my last one. I reworked this one a few times to get a rhyme scheme that I was happy with. I am happy it worked out okay. No, I haven't heard from Lora Hollings for quite a while either. I hope she is okay.

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