The Proposal ~ Part Two – by John Hansen

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   Misbah786posted 2 years ago

   Please read the second part of John's fascinating story.
   
   Here's the link:
   https://hubpages.com/literature/The-Pro … tion-Story
   
   Thank you!
   
   
   Hello, John!
   
   I enjoyed reading the second part of the story as well. Thanks for sharing... now I'm looking forward to the next part!
   
   Blessings to you and your wife!

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Misbah. Thank you very much for sharing this second part of the story. I am glad you are finding it fascinating. Blessings.

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         Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         You're most welcome!

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   The second part of the story was quite enjoyable. I am glad the suspense is unleashed. I am also happy that you listened to your wife's suggestion of a happy, feel-good ending. The story made me smile all along. I like the message of the story as well. Thanks for sharing, John. And of course, I am looking forward  to reading the next part.
   
   Thanks, Misbah, for sharing John's continued work.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Rosina, thank you for continuing to follow the story. I am glad you agree with happy ending rather than a darker one I had in mind. The fact that you smiled throughout and liked the message are very positive vibes. Thank you.

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Great story, John. This story is going in a feel-good way and kindness, which is quite refreshing. This reminds me of an old Salman Khan film(he is an Indian actor) in which the main character did a good deed for somebody. In return, he asks the recipient to do some good deed to another person, and the other person repeats a good deed to some other person and so on, thus creating a chain of good deeds.
   
   Thanks for this interesting premise
   
   Thanks, Misbah, for sharing.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Have watched it! I guess the title of the film was 'Jai ho!'

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         Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Misbah, Thank you for identifying the movie that Ravi spoke of.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Ravi, I am pleased this story reminded you of that Salman Khan movie that Misbah identified as ‘Jai ho.’ It sounds like a film worth watching, with an excellent message. Thank you for your generous comment.

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Bingo Misbah you are right

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   I love happy endings, John. When the first part of. the story ended I thought he was going to have to commit some type of crime, but you came up with a wonderful conclusion.
   
   Thank you for posting John's story, Misbah.

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   Hi Pamela, yes, I agree that you can’t beat a happy ending. I am glad I managed to change the more obvious direction of this story satisfactorily.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   “Pay it forward” is great advice, even if we help others in a small way. I’m glad that you’ve used this theme in your story, John. It’s a good reminder for us. I’m looking forward to the next part of the story.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      It is a message we need to keep spreading and reminding ourselves of, Linda. Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope the final part doesn’t disappoint.

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   charity mtisiposted 2 years ago

   Its a wonderful article with a heartwarming video. The world is certainly a much better place with acts of kindness all round.
   Thank you John. The message is loud and clear.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Charity, I am glad you enjoyed this story and it’s message. Yes, acts of kindness can’t help but make the world a better place.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Well that didn't take you too long...
   Pay it forward.
   
   That's one of my favorite movies.  The world would be a better place if only people would. 
   But then...
   What's gonna happen in this story.
   
   Will he tell Cynthia.. or let it ride.
   
   Will he find someone to nominate...tsk..tsk..the story continues.
   
   Great job

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      The story took a positive turn Brenda, but will that continue? Things can go awry if Michael doesn't follow the guidelines. Thank you for reading, and yep 'pay it forward.'

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Yes John...
         You've kept that spark alive

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    ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years ago

    Hello John!
    Happy to read the next part of your story, with a positive message!
    I do believe that kindness and good deeds come back to us, and happiness can come, when everyone around is also happy!
    Looking forward to the next part of your beautiful story!
    Thanks for sharing and thanks to Misbah as well!

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       Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

       Hi Chitrangada. I agree with your sentiments about kindness and good deeds coming back to us. Thank you for your kind comment, and I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint.

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    Carb Divaposted 2 years ago

    John, I love happy endings and this one didn't disappoint. I'm glad you listened to your wife (that's never a bad idea {{wink wink}} )

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    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Yes, Linda, I learnt long ago that if I listen to my wife’s advice It tends to result in a better outcome

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       Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       What a sweet statement...
       
       Your wife is incredibly blessed to have you, John. You are one of the most generous and kind people I have ever met. I wish you both eternal happiness, joy, love, and peace. May your home be filled with laughter and peace. Ameen!
       
       Many Blessings and Love to you and your family!

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          Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          +1

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    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Awww Misbah! Now I am blushing.

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       Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

       

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