Shopping Day Blues ~ by John Hansen

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Please take some time to read John's very wonderful response to the word prompt, 'Shopping'.
   
   Here's the link: https://hubpages.com/literature/Shopping-Day-Blues

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hello John!
      I enjoyed the poems on Shopping, with a touch of humor. As always, your response is very well done.
      'Retail therapy' sounds interesting.
      I enjoy window shopping with my daughter.
      Thank you for sharing this.
      And, thanks Misbah for sharing John's excellent work.

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Hello Chitrangada. Thank you for your encouraging comment. I am happy that you enjoyed these poems and found them humorous. I am told “retail therapy” has a positive effect on depression, unfortunately it is only temporary and needs to be repeated often.
         Window shopping is great too.

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      Carb Divaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Very cute take on shopping. You've nailed it again John. (And for the record, I hate shopping).

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Hello Linda, so glad you can relate to my aversion to shopping, Fancy,  Carb Diva not enjoying shopping.

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            Carb Divaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Oh, does grocery shopping count? (Oops). I can still wear the clothes I purchased 30 years ago, and since I'm no longer in the 9-to-5 grind of wearing heels and suits, my spending is pretty much just food and flowers which (in my mind) do not qualify as "shopping." Both are basic necessities.

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               Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

               Well actually food shopping is one I can handle. I wish I could still wear the clothes I did 30 years ago..but then, knowing my aversion to clothes shopping, I probably would be. So, maybe it is a good idea I can’t lol.

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   I enjoyed reading all of your poems, John. Such a fun read. I loved it all. The quotes are also very interesting. By the way I love shopping. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful hub with us.
   
   Happy weekend!
   
   Blessings always!

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Misbah for sharing John's post.
      
      That was amazing poetry based on Brenda's prompt, "Shopping", John. You met her challenge superbly. It was mindblowing, full of a sense of humor, which I enjoyed so much. The acrostic poem and the Haiku, along with the quotes, were equally intriguing. Thank you for an entertaining evening.

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Hi Rosina, wow, thank you so much for the “mindblowing” comment. That is a real compliment and most welcome. I am so glad that you enjoyed these poems and that they entertained you. That is what I aim for. Have a great week.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for sharing this article, Misbah. Somehow, I knew you would love shopping I am glad you enjoyed my poems even though they are quite anti-shopping. You have a great and blessed weekend too.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         You are most welcome!

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   John
   "Shopping Day Blues" is such a cute poem.
   
   Most men prefer to sit outside on shopping day.
   
   I can picture a man with a tired & uninterested look on his face when I read this line...he tags along like a faithful dog...
   
   While "she looks at every clothing rack
   like it’s a Christmas tree."
   
   Online shopping is easier but i like your ideal ....just going to the races to place a small bet.
   
   
   Price Wars ~ an Acrostic Poem tells us the bold truth.
   
   It is heaven on earth to some of us, but those price wars get the best of us.
   We become rude & impatient trying to get the deal.
   
   "A Haiku" made me laugh.
   Window shopoing doesn't cost a cent.
   
   I imagine this is what men enjoy the most.
   
   Even when you the word prompt is not your cup of tea...You do not disappoint.
   
   I enjoy some shopping ....like buying clothes or xmas presents.
   But I despise the grocery store anymore or gaving to tun in and out to pick up small items.
   
   Great writing.
   I'll post a link in the word prompt article.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Brenda. You were spot on in your interpretation, but then I guess it was pretty clear this was written from a man’s point of view. So glad you enjoyed each poem. Have a great weekend.

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         John
         Either way you did a good job writing it...since you don't like shopping.

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            Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            John
            I forgot to tell you...
            I love this quote:
            
            When women are depressed, they eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. It’s a whole different way of thinking.
            — Elayne Boosler

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            Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks Brenda.

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   I really enjoyed your poetry, John. I think there is probably a lot of truth in your poem for many people.
   
   Thank you for posting this article, Misbah. Blessings.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Pamela, thank you for reading and enjoying my poetry. Yes, think there may be some truth there somewhere.

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   surovi99posted 3 years ago

   I think, John, you didn't receive my comment although it is visible to me and maybe it is not to you. Here it is again:
   
   Thank you, Misbah for sharing John's post.
   
   That was amazing poetry based on Brenda's prompt, "Shopping", John. You met her challenge superbly. It was mindblowing, full of a sense of humor, which I enjoyed so much. The acrostic poem and the Haiku, along with the quotes, were equally intriguing. Thank you for an entertaining evening.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Sorry, Rosina. I did miss your comment the first time. I don’t know how..it was so wonderful and I have replied now. Thank you again.

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   John's poems are always a treat to read, and these were no exception.  Thanks Misbah for sharing his cute poems with us.  I would personally rather avoid crowded stores.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Peggy, thank you for reading and commenting. I always appreciate your support, and yes, it is best to avoid those crowded stores as much as possible.

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   bdegiulioposted 3 years ago

   John, your poem sums up my sentiments about shopping exactly.  I usually look for a comfy chair somewhere to sit and wait, or I’ll just go for a walk somewhere.  Great job.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Bill, glad you agree with my sentiments. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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   Eurofileposted 3 years ago

   Thanks for posting, Misbah. I enjoyed reading John's take on shopping. It struck a lot of chords and I appreciated the light and humorous tone.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Liz. I am glad you enjoyed the humour and could relate to my poetry.

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   vidsagsterposted 3 years ago

   Wonderful poems John. I enjoyed reading them. Along with the humor, there is so much truth in them. It is always a treat to read your work John. Thanks Misbah for sharing.

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      Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Vidya, thank you for reading and enjoying. I always like to add a bit of humour, it helps to sell the message (excuse the pun.)

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