The Proposal ~ The Final Chapter by John Hansen

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   surovi99posted 2 years ago

   Please read the final intriguing chapter of "The Proposal" by John. Here is the link:
   https://hubpages.com/literature/The-Pro … al-Chapter
   
   Hi John,
   This is the perfect fruitful ending to the story in series. Loved the great message in it of the "butterfly effect." It was very serene and soothing to the soul. Thanks a lot for a great and enjoyable read in my lovely afternoon here.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for sharing the link to this final chapter, Rosina. I am happy you found it serene and soothing the way it ended. I always appreciate your comments.

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Interesting ending John. I am sure the family would be very happy with Michael's contribution in time. Just one thought - maybe a sequel can be thought of-
   
   Will the family discover about Michael in the future?
   Will they try to repay Michael?
   Will the family carry the scheme forward?
   
   Thanks, John for sharing.
   
   Thanks, Rosina for sharing John's story.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for reading this, Ravi, and your suggestion is helpful. I did feel there could have been more to this story, if not conflict, some other questions to be delved into and answers found. Cheers.

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   This is a good ending, John. The people that lost their house in a fire sure need the help. Ravi asks some interesting questions, but we won't know the answers as the family won't know Michael was involved and no one is allowed to talk. I like your reminder John of how we need to take time to consider what others are going through.
   
   Thanks for posting John's story, Rosina.

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   Misbah786posted 2 years ago

   The third part of the story is just as good, John. I completely agree with your idea of being kind to others. We never know what another person is going through in their life. Doing little acts of kindness is essential for the betterment of society and for creating a healthy and happy atmosphere around us. Kindness costs nothing! What we do, good or bad affects the world. It's up to us what changes we want to see. If we want, we can create heaven on Earth; if we don't, we can also make hell.
   I enjoyed the story and loved the message. Thank you for sharing.
   
   And also, thank you, Rosina, for sharing John's story.
   
   Blessings always!

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   Hello Misbah, I love your explanation of how acts of kindness lead to the betterment of society. That is so true. Much better than the alternative. Blessings to you, my friend.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   John...
   By cynthia seeing the news story about the family, and alerting him...she became part of the obvious choice.
   
   Even though she is unaware, he knows in his heart that she wanted to help them. That makes the burden of carrying this secret a bit easier...but I wonder when the news comes out that they were helped by an anonymous donor....can he keep his mouth shut or will he eventually spill the beans to Cynthia.
   
   Great ending though and way to teach us a valuable lesson.
   
   Each action in life affects the next one.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you Brenda, your insights and questions you raise are very valid. I have a feeling Michael may eventually spill the beans to Cynthia (after all she was really one of the recipients, and the one who gave him the idea of nominating the family affected by fire.)
      I am glad you liked the ending, and feel it teaches a valuable lesson.

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Your story has an excellent message for everyone, John. Even if we don’t have money to spare or have other difficulties in life, there is probably some way in which we could help another person.

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      Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for reading the story in its entirety, Linda. I am glad you feel it conveys that message of helping others in whatever way we can.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   For the few that haven't finished reading John's last piece....
   Worth the time to read.

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