Why Do I Still Dream of Her? By Ravi Rajan.

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   Jodahposted 23 months ago

   Ravi has written two beautiful poems in response to Brenda’s word prompt “Dreams.” Please take some time to read.
   https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … eam-of-her

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      tsmogposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Ravi, I dare say your wordsmithing opened my heart and soul to memories of Love experienced. The first poem caught me unaware discovering metaphorical meaning for this 'self'. The second led to remembering the simple pleasures of Love. Nice!!

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   surovi99posted 23 months ago

   These are lovely romantic poems, which you feel like reading again and again. Thanks for this bewitching response to Brenda's prompt, "Dreams."
   
   Thanks, John, for sharing Ravi's post

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   ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

   Thanks John for reading and sharing

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   ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

   Thanks Rosina

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   ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

   Thanks, Tim.I am glad you liked the poems.

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   Misbah786posted 23 months ago

   Beautiful poems, Ravi. The sudden shift from joy to sorrow in the final stanza of your first poem is quite moving. Thanks for sharing
   Thanks for sharing Ravi's poem, John!
   Blessings always!

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Ravi can surprise us.

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   ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

   Thanks Misbah

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months ago

   Ravi...
   I'm happy to see you've written a few poems for the word prompt.
   I'll let you know when I read them...
   Probably be tomorrow.

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   ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

   Thanks Brenda

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    ChitrangadaSharanposted 23 months ago

    Beautifully crafted poems, Raviji. I liked reading both your responses to Brenda’s word prompt, Dreams.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Thank you John.

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    ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

    Thanks Chitrangada

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    Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months ago

    Ravi
    Your poem, "Dreaming About Her" starts off as a beautiful love story.
    Then it quickly becomes sad with her untimely death shattering all those magical dreams.
    
    In your poem "Monsoon Dreams" you also paint us a beautiful picture of a man and woman falling in love.
    
    Then the heartbreaking moment of only memories are left behind.
    
    Really great poems that move our emotions.
    
    I posted a link in the word prompt article

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    AliciaCposted 23 months ago

    Ravi has created beautiful and enjoyable poems with vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing them, John.

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    ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

    Thanks, Brenda

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    ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

    Thanks Linda

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    Farah N Huqposted 23 months ago

    The thoughts and emotions were vividly expressed through the poetic lines. Loved both the poems.

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    ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

    Thanks, Farah

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