He First Day of the Season by Ravi Rajan

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  1. Jodah profile image90
    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Please read Ravi’s excellent poetic response to the word prompt “first.”

    https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … of-Seasons

    (That should be “The First Day of the Season.”)

  2. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks John for sharing

    1. ChitrangadaSharan profile image90
      ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Raviji!
      Excellent response to the word prompt, First. So thoughtful of you to associate this with the seasons, in your well crafted haikus.
      I enjoyed reading your haikus and tankas, with nice imagery.
      Thank you for sharing.
      Thank you John, for sharing this in the forum.

  3. surovi99 profile image82
    surovi99posted 2 years ago

    These are beautiful haikus and tankas based on the first days of spring, autumn and winter seasons. Each one of them is uniquely gracious with their imagery. Yes, I enjoyed reading them and think they are a good response to Brenda's prompt. Thank you for sharing, Ravi.

    Thanks John for highlighting Ravi's work.

  4. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Rosina

  5. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Chitrangada

  6. Brenda Arledge profile image80
    Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

    Ravi
    In your article "The First Day of the Season" you paint a beautiful picture of the word "first."

    There is always a promise in the word "first," a promise of hope, new tidings, or even peace that we can expect in the future.

    Then your writing is based on the magical first day of every season: spring, autumn, and winter. 

    On the First Day of Spring you show us how everything starts coming back to life including the song in your heart.


    "On the First Day of Autumn" you show us how dismal a chilly autumn day is with those rains & bitter cold.
    We get chilly just looking upon a gloomy day with no color.

    "On the First Day of Winter" you paint a beautiful scene of the winter sky & you're happy the end of the workweek has arrived.

    Then you're a bit melancholy listening to the sound of the cukoo who reminds you of those broken hearts that come with gloomy days.

    But you have hope that your feelings of love will remain as you hold hands in the sunset.

    As the winter winds continue to blow you hold on tight to the love you shared yesterday. A great feeling.

    These poems show how each season changes our moods.

    They are lovely...except for the spider...he can stay trapped.

    I'll post a link in the word prompt article.

  7. Misbah786 profile image82
    Misbah786posted 2 years ago

    Splendid! I enjoyed reading all of your beautiful poems, Ravi. It’s a very beautiful response to Brenda’s word prompt, ‘First’. Thank you so much for sharing.

    Thank you so much, John, for sharing Ravi’s beautiful hub.
    Happy weekend! Blessings to both of you!

  8. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Misbah

  9. RozlinMohsin profile image60
    RozlinMohsinposted 2 years ago

    Beautiful response to Brenda's word prompt, Ravi. I enjoyed reading all haikus and tankas with nice imagery at the first day of seasons.

  10. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Brenda for your kind comments

  11. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Rozin

  12. AliciaC profile image92
    AliciaCposted 2 years ago

    You've created a great group of poems, Ravi. I enjoyed reading them all, but my favourite is the one about the groaning gate. I love the imagery in that poem.

  13. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Linda

  14. Pamela99 profile image86
    Pamela99posted 2 years ago

    The haikus and tankas are excellent and a beautiful way to write about each new season. I enjoyed reading each of your poems, Ravi. Each poem is a beautiful response to Brenda's prompt.

    Thank you for posting Ravi's poetry John.

  15. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Pamela

  16. vidsagster profile image87
    vidsagsterposted 2 years ago

    Beautiful haikus on the different seasons, Ravi. I really enjoyed reading them. /the pictures are also lovely. A great response to this week's word prompt. Thanks John for sharing

  17. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Thanks Vidya

 
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