Let's create a funny poem-contribute with 4 or less rhyming verses

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   Edliraposted 13 years ago

   I met you a warm,bright sunny day
   Felt lucky and happy like no one on earth
   You were way out of my league
   For a godess like you, I couldn't be worth

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   debbiesdailyviewsposted 13 years ago

   We picnicked on the fresh green turf
   Weighing up each others worth

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      Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      lol.. nicel done, debbie.

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      Laura du Toitposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      but the scales werre tipped, was it the wine
      or the heavy thoughts of you being mine

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   Victoria Stephensposted 13 years ago

   I couldn't think just why I liked you 
   But i drank more wine and now I know,
   I think your incredibly good looking
   But I'll try hard to not let it show

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   Edliraposted 13 years ago

   I can see we are stuck here. So I will try to get the engine going again...lol
   
   
   It went so fine for a week or two
   And then we started what old couples do
   The sweet faced angel turned into a hag
   That screams, yells, curses and brag

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   couturepopcafeposted 13 years ago

   "You sodden old brute, how dare you yell.
   I'll take my inheritance and see you in hell."
   "Ok." said the mister, "but just wait and see.
   I've got a bit saved for the mistress and me."

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      couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      He started to gather the things that he could
      while the old missus eyed up the charred firewood.
      She picked up a piece in her tiny pink hand
      And upon his bald head did the the firewood land.

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         HopeisFreeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Give grace and kindness with the things in your hand
         Be careful with touch how those things will land.
         Only touch lovingly the things you would get
         from others you touched and others you've met;
         For the things you give others with love or with spite
         Will return someday to you with even more might.

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            couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            "A boomerang, yes, this is what I will need," said the crazy old man thinking he would be freed.
            
            "Oh, ho!" he smiled slyly and went to the phone.
            "I'll call my friend, Aussie.  For sure he's got one."

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   Edliraposted 13 years ago

   You wouldn't believe it was us two
   What became of the angel I have no clue
   Or maybe she was a whitch in diguise
   With claws out now, fire in her eyes

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      couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      "Oh, dear," said the missus.  I really did miss.
      I was trying to hit you where you take a p---.
      
      "You rotten old hag.  I have had it with you."
      
      "Well, if that's the case, I'm rubber, you're glue."

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         Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         lol... your hilarious, couturepopcafe :-). Love it!

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            Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            you're ;-)

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               couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

               Edlira, Edlira, well what have we here? 
               You're supposed to be rhyming, my pretty young dear.
               
               So because you have broken your own little rule
               I'm afraid you are banished from this rhyming pool.

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                  memoretonposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                  Oh dear Edira, Counturepopcafe has kicked you out
                  I recon you should stand up and loudly shout....
                  "Hey! my rhyming idea is rather cool
                  So guess what, I'm gonna jump back in the pool!"

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                     shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

                     With nary a lifeguard or a life saving vest,
                     ...nothing but my knickers and the hair on my chest.
                     I'll take a whack at this, so just before I fall,
                     ... I scream upon the top of my lungs, "CANNONBALL!"

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   ajcorposted 13 years ago

   so when rules rule
   for edlira jewel
   the rhyming pool
   becomes a tool
   for the cool school
   of ridicule

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      couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      A cannonball scream at the school of big rhyme
      Our ajcor jumps in to the rhyme just in time
      Edlira is missing in action I fear
      So couturepopcafe throws a rhyme into gear

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         Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         My dear cotourepopcafe, with a sharp mind
         A poet like you is hard to find
         One thing though I have to make clear
         A literary challenge I never fear....lol

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   ajcorposted 13 years ago

   just a fraction of action
   can throw out the gear
   but to be missing in action
   is nothing to fear
   if the lady in question
   beats a well earned retreat
   from the rhyming words
   out on the street..

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   manlypoetrymanposted 13 years ago

   Looking around to see...
   Who can "bring it" with Poetry.
   Maybe...more will join in the rhyme...
   But I'm done for now...This is my 4th line.

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    ajcorposted 13 years ago

    succinctness the essence
    I read too late
    I write lines of eight
    where it should be four!

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Ajcor, have no great fear,
       we're not sticklers for rules here!
       We can find it within our hearts to forgive this one trespass,
       Just don't let it happen again, else we'll have to kick your...
       
       

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          manlypoetrymanposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          Well done...

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          ajcorposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          charming....

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          Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          ......lol
          
          Wise you spoke, dear shynsly
          So if we end out we shound't ask why
          When rules and regulations you break
          The consequence as well you may take....lol

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    manlypoetrymanposted 13 years ago

    Happens...what can anyone say?
    It is easy with Poetry to get carried away.
    Still don't mean we shouldn't follow the rule...
    On Second Thought...It's not like we're all in school!

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       Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Even in school it wasn't that bad
       If you were able red handed not to get
       A mild violation, or maybe two
       I am sure has never hurt neither us nor you...lol

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    My dear good friends, I am back in the game
    With my rhymes to win 10 seconds of fame :-)
    The rhyme though was not about me
    But about the hag and the schmuck, happy they used to be....lol

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    Leepa Valleyposted 13 years ago

    wise and shynsly hnmmmm

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    couturepopcafeposted 13 years ago

    Oh, right.  We forgot all about the old hag
    and her cheating old boy who was dragging his bag
    when she clobbered him good with a chunk of old wood
    and he offered her up to the house as old slag
    
    So what's to become of these miserly two
    he took all her money and outbound he flew
    to the arms of another young filly who will
    turn out to be just a new contrary pill.

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       With no life lesson learned, for either of the two,
       ...both faced with the question, "What should I do?"
       
       Love is lovely, but lust is powerful too,
       ...neglecting the former leaves both, with a jaded view.

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          Mandeeadairposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          and now we have learned why men should not CHEAT,
          the grass isn't greener, its filled with deceit.
          The man went looking to quench his own thirst,
          and ended up with another 'old hag' who was worse.

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          Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          So bitter and upset they went each their way
          The game got just too dangerous to play
          The hag dreaming a real prince to meet
          The schmuck longning for a lady so sweet
          
          
          As they say,  hope's the last one to die
          So the schmuck and the hag should no more cry
          In this life you what you give you get
          There's no use in living in anger and regret

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Amazed and impressed, I never cease to be,
    By the sheer volume of talent within this community.
    
    HubPages is the vehicle, and provides the display,
    For all you wicked literary genuises to come out and play!

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    F.B. Spanniganposted 13 years ago

    Then one day, a man threw a pear at the sheeps head and the woman said something about the pudding

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       couturepopcafeposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Thon pudding is wonderful, thick and sublime
       I would be your wife for this pudding in time
       That mean streak you've shown throwing pears at the sheep
       Is something I'll fear when we two are asleep.
       
       So Spannigan Hannigan drinking his ale
       Did marry the wench and he then became pale
       Just thinking he lost all his freedom and then
       He proceeded to throw her into the sheep's pen.
       
       He gathered his pears and his apples and suet
       And tried for a week to divorce and undo it
       But preacher man said you are bound to the wench
       Now Spannigan Hannigan sits on his bench
       
       Just trying to figure out how she got through.
       "My pudding," he cried."So now here's what I'll do.
       I'll bake no more pudding and then she will go."
       So he didn't, she did, and the rest you all know.

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    Extinct Soulposted 13 years ago

    what the heck was that?
    is that a rhyme or what?
    are you really participating
    or you're just here for mocking?

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Not sure where our gracious host, Edlira, went,
    ...nor of Lady GA-GA's mysterious intent.
    
    Though I'd offer a word of advice, not to be rude,
    ...especially if one prefers for their posts to get viewed.

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       Extinct Soulposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       for your next tale, I would surely wait
       and hope somehow I could participate
       my last post was just for humor though
       never will I intend to give someone a blow..

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    I had thought perhaps another verse lay just around the bend,
    ...but it would seem that our sad story has now come to an end.
    
    But this thread is too fun to just let it die,
    ...so I'll think of a new tale, I promise I'll try!

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Poor dear Suzie, walking alone in the rain,
    alarm failed to sound, again she missed the train.
    
    Quiet, meek, and humble... not at all like the rest,
    though most would call her an "ugly duckling" at best.

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    sofsposted 13 years ago

    Suzie was so crazy
    silly and lazy
    that she never got up from bed
    Until she was dead!

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       (AHH! You killed her already!? LMAO)

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          sofsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          OOps sorrry. Cross my heart

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          Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          But Suzy wasn't dead, just soundly asleep
          she had had a bad day and was in troubles deep ....lol

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    Extinct Soulposted 13 years ago

    (let's put a happy ending..)
    
    And so her soul began to fly
    as she waved the Earth goodbye
    she giggles her way to the kingdom above
    where she could watch the people she'd loved
    
    

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Haha... nice "save" 

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          Edliraposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          God father said, Suzy you're not yet done
          So, go back to earth and try to have some fun
          Meet new people, smile, this time be smart
          I see hubpages is the right place to start....lol

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    quicksandposted 13 years ago

    T'is a shame to have you here
    You're such a lousy harp player
    
    Take harp lessons when you get back there
    And bring back some decent clothes to wear
    
    White robes are in fashion here
    To hell with Gucci and Hillfiger
    
    Heaven's fashions you need not fear
    White robes are always the trend my dear
    
    

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    Go now child, be happy and LIVE
    remember in life you get what you give
    Smile and be good to people you have met
    I promise,upon return the white wings you'll get :-D

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    quicksandposted 13 years ago

    What use are wings that are all white
    That blend with clouds when in flight
    
    My designer clothes I need to display
    To hell with white is all that I say
    
    

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    Dear child, I support free will
    So you can blaspheme if like that you feel
    Can't come back here, in this case though
    I am afraid you'll have to go below ;-)

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Twisted horns springing suddenly from her head,
    while those white wings morphed a sinister shade of red!
    
    With a raucous laugh and a glint in her eye,
    Our dear sweet Suzie lept from the sky!

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    What's up with you guys today
    To save Suzie, you're leaving no way
    And yet I say, please come help me
    together let's change Suzie's destiny )

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    (sorry, lol...)
    
    through the power of rhyme,
    and a clever trick of time.
    
    During her casting from one extreme to the other,
    from the corner of her eye, Suzie saw her former lover.

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    )
    
    Was he closer UP or closer BELOW???
    To ask him or not in rescue she doesn't know
    And for sure she has to inquire
    'cause if she doesn't she might end up in fire...

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    With romantic memories alight in her brain,
    Suzie thought back, and remembered the train!
    
    Lifting her head from the uncomfortable pillow-seam,
    She thought to herself, "Wow, what a strange dream!"

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    Kylo88posted 13 years ago

    but no one was home
    to hear her remark
    there was no sound
    except for a lark
    
    the bird flew from it's branch
    in the window it came
    then opened his beak, saying
    "If it's all the same..."
    
    "Wait!" cried Suzie
    as she sat up in bed
    for a moment she questioned
    if she had hit her head.
    
    (sorry. 4got about the 4line rule lol)

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       Kylo88posted 13 years agoin reply to this

       "YOu just spoke" she continued though she knew that she shouldn't
       "That i did." Said the Lark "Did you think that i couldn't?
       
       I was going to tell you something you should know.
       Did you know you're quite crazy?" Then in came a crow.
       
       "Crazy indeed!" Said the lovely black bird
       then each flew off without another word.

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    Extinct Soulposted 13 years ago

    And Suzie was left with eyes open wide
    "yeah right!" she said, as the birds took their flight
    she truly believes she's still in a dream
    so she closed her eyes hoping to wake-up in another scene

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       With coffee on the brew,
       and a long list of things to do...
       
       Back to that dream her mind went,
       What could it mean, a messege sent?

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          Kylo88posted 13 years agoin reply to this

          so suzie slept on
          her chore list forgot
          ignoring the screaming
          as the ketle grew hot

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Desperately wishing to learn the meaning,
    to relive the dream is what she was seeking.
    
    But in the end, it was to no avail,
    for try as she might, she continued to fail.

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    Extinct Soulposted 13 years ago

    Tears fell down from her eyes
    as she wander about her 'why's'
    
    why is she locking herself in a room
    while the flowers outside is already in bloom

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       So enough with this self-hating routine,
       it's time to start fresh, to start new and clean!
       
       She lifted her chin, plastered a smile on her face,
       and stepped out into the world, free from disgrace.

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          shimmering Dawnposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          with new determination
          and  great  strength of purpose
          without the slightest  hesitation
          She forges ahead without a fuss 

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    shynslyposted 13 years ago

    Out into the world with a new sense of self,
    Her happiness restored, improving her health.
    
    She stepped confidently through the door,
    beautiful and wise, an ugly duckling no more.

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    The world out there has plenty to give
    Suzie this time a new life will live
    Free from self-guilt, pity or regret
    No tears and no worry to make her upset

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    Rosie2010posted 13 years ago

    First thing she does is eat a fruit
    For Susie believes it's super food
    Then out she ventures oh what a sight
    The flowers are blooming and the sun is bright

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       Rosie2010posted 13 years agoin reply to this

       She is so darn happy she begins to dance
       She swings and she twirls to everyone's annoyance
       What's wrong with this woman, is she out of her mind?
       Suzie just laughs and giddily shows them her behind

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    Extinct Soulposted 13 years ago

    her dancing suddenly came to stop
    when she bump and in the floor she dropped
    
    bumped with....oh a beautiful boy it has been
    her cheeks red up as their eyes locked in
    
    (aaayyyiiieeee!!! )

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       shynslyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

       Was her long-lost lover, whom she'd drempt of before,
       but this was real life, not a dream anymore!
       
       Still with the tender kindness in his eyes,
       and the same loving soul, incapable of lies.

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          Extinct Soulposted 13 years agoin reply to this

          (that was really nice..."and the same loving soul, incapable of lies")
          

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    Edliraposted 13 years ago

    Suzie had almost given up love
    From the moment her half went up above
    But good god gave her one chance more
    A new love to cherish, embrace and adore

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    sofsposted 13 years ago

    Starting her life with vigor anew,
    Thanking the Lord for pulling her through,
    Walking with strength of mind and heart,
    To fill perfectly into her new part!

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