The Curve of Passing Time: A poem by Misbah

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   Misbah, I really enjoyed this wonderful poem of unrequited love. I love the quote by J M Barrie and totally agree with it. Well done.
   Here is the link for others to comment.
   https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … ssing-time

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      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Misbah, I loved your poetry about unrequited love. Many a time it happens for real in our lives. But we always have to pick ourselves up and move on. Great job done here.
      
      John, thanks for sharing Misbah's post.

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         Jodahposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         You are welcome, Rosina.

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         Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me on this, Rosina. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I appreciate your very kind comment.
         Blessings and Love as always!!

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Well expressed Misbah! We can see this around ourselves and such one sided love is painful. But, it's wise to move on. Although it's easier said than done.
      Thank you for sharing.
      Thank you John, for sharing this in the forum.

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         Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much for your very kind and generous comment, dear Di. I am so glad you liked it. I appreciate your kindness
         
         Blessings and Lots of Love

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      This is so kind of you, John. Thank you so much, dear friend.  Your kindness is greatly appreciated
      
      I am so glad you enjoyed reading this poem
      Stay well and keep smiling!!
      
      Blessings always!!

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      vidsagsterposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You have expressed the emotion of unrequited love very well in this poem, Misbah. Though it is painful one has to move on for their own good. Thanks for sharing John.

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         Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much for your very kind and generous comment, Dear Vidya. Greatly appreciated!
         Blessings and Love to you!!

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   Moondot1822posted 2 years ago

   Thanks for sharing, Jodah. Unrequited love is painful. To overcome this pain, we have to accept the pain. You have described this feeling very well in your poem, dear sis.
   Stay safe and healthy...

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, dear sister. I am so happy you enjoyed reading it. Gratitude!!
      
      Stay Happy and Healthy
      Blessings and Love to you!!

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Misbah has created a thought-provoking and very interesting poem. Thank you for sharing it, John.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Linda, I am happy to know you enjoyed the poem and found it interesting and thought provoking. Thank you so much for your very kind and sweet feedback. Greatly appreciated.
      Blessings and Love as always!!

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Misbah
   Your words are poetry at its best.
   Awesome write.
   
   You've expressed those feelings which are too hard to describe...yet you described it.
   
   It's like the way a narcissist acts, feels, and thinks.
   
   I'd rather have nothing than to be denied a little of everything.
   
   Great job.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Bredz, your comment made my day. So glad to know you enjoyed it. You are a great, precious and very supportive friend. Thank you so much for your very beautiful and delightful comments. Much Gratitude!!!
      Much Love and Many Blessings!!

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Your welcome..
         
         You're writing just keeps getting better & better.
         
         It's like music jumping off the page

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            Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

            You are so sweet, Bredz.
            God bless you and your loved ones always!

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               Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Thanks Misbah

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   Peggy Wposted 2 years ago

   Thanks John for sharing Misbah's tale of unrequited love.  Time passes swiftly for all of us, and we need to focus on what is most important in life.

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for taking the time to read and for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me, Dear Peggy. I am glad you enjoyed it. Much Love!
      Blessings always!!

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