Finish off the Poem.... I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my ey

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   bellawritter23posted 13 years ago

   Finish off the Poem.... I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye...
   
   cross my heart
   and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye
   wait a moment,
   i spoke a lie
   i never really
   wanted to die.
   but if I may
   and if I might
   my heart is open
   for tonight
   though my lips are sealed
   and a promise is true
   i won't break my word
   my word to you.....

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      Harishprasadposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      come and kiss me
      give me a wild hug
      never again I'll cry

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         dogsandcatshqposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Awesome

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         alohacarelessposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Cool

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      Waqasjand48posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Beautiful

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      Heatherlavernposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I cross my heart and hope to die,
      stick a needle in my eye,
      Oh my! i cry, oh my... i sigh
      can a stitch in time save mine?
      
      It was a joke, you silly dork
      why did you stick me in the
      eye!

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      RobinReentersposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      No lie those sticks tickling my funny bone
      made me lose my voice of tone

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      Martyn Tilseposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Cross my heart and hope to die.
      Stick a needle in my eye.
      Run a mile and leap ahead,
      Anything to keep this thread.

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      Sharlee01posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye...If my eye begins to bleed admonish me for preforming such a foolish deed...

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      liiifenetposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Good

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      Lady Dazyposted 13 months agoin reply to this

      Believe me
      or believe me not
      I am all that you have got.

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   aallard23posted 13 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye....liar liar pants on fire. lmao

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   JayeWisdomposted 13 years ago

   Cross my heart and hope to die
   Stick a needle in my eye
   If I foolishly make this vow
   Get me to a hospital now

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      Fancy Poet Girlposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Nice

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   K. Burns Darlingposted 13 years ago

   I cross my heart
   And hope to die
   Stick a needle
   In my eye
   Wait a minute
   I spoke a lie
   I never really
   Wanted to die
   But is I may
   And if I might
   My heart is open
   For tonight
   Though my lips are sealed
   And a promise is true
   I won't break
   My word to you
   But if by chance
   I should somehow slip
   Accidental words
   Tumbling from my lips
   If this solemn vow
   I should break
   Then no more breaths
   Shall I take.
   Thus you know
   This promise is not a lie
   For I am not
   Prepared to die.

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      alkanarulaposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Beautiful

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      Sakshi Davessarposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      amazing..

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      Ruthlessishereposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      very admirable.. way to go

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      RobinReentersposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Just amazing every word formed the way it should be

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      shoramposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Nice l love it.
      http://bit.ly/2AaelAG

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      Heatherlavernposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      like it,,, lovely

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   Richawriterposted 13 years ago

   It's just that sometimes, life gets hard
   As though life dealt a fateful card
   I lose control, begin to tumble
   As my thoughts are confused, my feelings jumbled
   
   Cross my heart and hope to die
   I'll merely sit with you and cry
   My spirit drowned in gushing tears
   My mind awash with guilt and fears
   
   Abide with me, on this night of nights
   As I open my soul and let crows take flight
   Lend me your ear, and a shoulder to cry on
   And I'll shed endless tears, be a soldier to count on
   
   Cross my heart and hope to die
   Tonight's the night I tell you why
   I haven't been myself just lately
   And why my heart is hurting greatly

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      tithi5683posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      nice

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   haikutwinkleposted 13 years ago

   ...then I remembered
   the stranger who lend a hand
   the kid whose smile is sincere
   the baby who laughed happily
   the parent whose concern is deep
   the sibling who never gave up
   the friend who held a positive light
   ...and Ied me thinking
   one life linking many hearts
   one death causing many pains
   one truth worth more than lies
   one clarity towards freedom
   one open heart leads to many open doors
   one healing thought moving beyond hurts
   one word...one word of forgiveness
   to the self, to the soul, to the special person inside
   to the other, to the act, to the broken
   one promise...one promise to keep
   never to break, never to forget
   never to lie, never to confuse
   one heart,..one heart to give
   may it be safe, may it be loved
   may it be calm, may it have peace...

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      Shalimar Thompsonposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Wow I think that is very deep and beautiful. I really think that poem could be used as an inspiration to others. Hope you start a career writing. If you do GOOD LUCK!!!

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   MellyMooposted 13 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye
   If I do I will only cry
   I would rather eat a fly

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   mrpooperposted 12 years ago

   I cross my heart and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye
   Discovered my wife was living a lie
   Seems  she was really born a guy

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      edgemncpposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      was she/he from Thailand? nice nice..

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   Alyssa Annposted 12 years ago

   Cross my heart and hope to die
   stick a needle in my eye
   right in the middle of my sty
   god i hope i pop it

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    tobey100posted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart
    and hope to die
    stick a needle
    in my eye.
    
    If that don't work
    I've other means
    I'll put a ferret
    in my jeans.

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       fpherj48posted 8 years agoin reply to this

       LMAO!!!    Funny.  Really funny!

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    lsin82posted 12 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye
    But the words I speak are no lie
    My heart is yours and for you I'd die

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    gustaw1981posted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die.
    Stick a needle in my eye?
    Please do not ever, ever try
    Please ...
    Stop playing with needles when I cry.

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    leann2800posted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye...
    Just this once, couldn’t you try?
    To end the hate and stop the lie

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    tsmogposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye,
    
    If I don't get this crochet stitch down,
    
    I think I am going to cry!

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    Smart is Goodposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye
    Because them words
    now seem all lies
    Your promises
    fade through the sky
    My knees all bent
    cannot be fixed
    So tired to beg
    just to be tricked
    But Still I can't
    get over you
    so many things
    we have gone through
    If you wake up
    and I'm not there
    please, love
    do not despair
    Haven't got, unlike you
    shameful affairs
    but I escaped
    to never return
    the pain and heartbreak
    inside me burn
    I cross my heart again
    and hope to cry
    to get this needle
    off of my eye

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    Jennifer Granaposted 12 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    all my life I lived a lie
    abandoned and heartless am I
    waiting for a chance to fly.

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    sagsauthorityposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart
    
    and hope to die
    
    stick a needle
    
    in my eye
    
    wait a moment,
    
    i spoke a lie
    
    i never really wanted to die.
    
    but if I may
    
    and if I might
    
    my heart is open for tonight
    
    though my lips are sealed
    
    and a promise is true
    
    i won't break my word
    
    my word to you
    
    are u listening ?
    
    or just pretending?
    
    i can see u but do u see me too..?
    
    if yes then why didn u rescue?
    
    as i waited under that tree,
    
    till d dark turned to morning fog with me.
    
    yes its true..It hurts..
    
    when u r treated like dirt..
    
    i remember surrendering my being
    
    and yes u saw me coming clean.
    
    but when your turn came
    
    you acted lika black cloud passing widout rain
    
    i kept looking at u..
    
    as u hovered n passed ..
    
    so now m here
    
    all alone wid this needle n tear.
    
    tell me what to do..
    
    should i break it
    
    into my eye
    
    or should i wait for u till the time i die..

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    iviskeiposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die,
    Stick a needle in my eye.
    Ha! Kidding; I don't wanna die.
    Put that needle in your own eye!

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    ninacrimaldiposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and I hope to die, stick a needle in my eye
    i promised if you died, i would too
    because you said you loved me
    and i believed it to be true.

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    Trip to Romeposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart
    
    And hope to die
    
    Stick a needle
    
    In my eye
    
    Wait a minute
    
    I spoke a lie
    
    I never really
    
    Wanted to die
    
    But is I may
    
    And if I might
    
    My heart is open
    
    For tonight
    
    Though my lips are sealed
    
    And a promise is true
    
    I won't break
    
    My word to you
    
    But if by chance
    
    I should somehow slip
    
    Accidental words
    
    Tumbling from my lips
    
    If this solemn vow
    
    I should break
    
    Then no more breaths
    
    Shall I take.
    
    Thus you know
    
    This promise is not a lie
    
    For I am not
    
    Prepared to die.

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    eapratteposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye
    If my word should prove untrue
    How do who do hoodoo voodoo

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    danielleantoszposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die, stick a needle in my eye, I wish I hadn't told a lie, for now I have to....pay for cornea transplant surgery.  lol

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    nipnapcreationsposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart,
    And hope not to die,
    Stick a needle,
    In my eye,
    Wait a moment,
    I spoke a lie,
    I never really wanted to die,
    But if I may,
    And if I might,
    My heart is open,
    For tonight,
    Though my lips are sealed,
    And a promise is true,
    I won't break my word,
    My word to you,
    Although chances may come,
    Some from far,
    I held this vow,
    As a night upon a star,
    That what I've not,
    Said to you,
    Is something that,
    Remains to this day true,
    I hold your care,
    To my heart fast,
    And this love now spoken,
    Shall always ever last,
    until the day,
    That I may depart,
    I say this to thee,
    For I so cross my heart...

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    seichepreyposted 12 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye
    wait a moment, I spoke a lie
    I never really wanted to die.
    
    But if I may and if I might
    my heart is open for tonight
    though my lips are sealed and a promise true
    I won't break my word to you.
    
    I'll lean back
    into my chair
    prepare the attack
    and shave my hair.
    
    Put cold barrel against hot skin,
    cock the hammer
    blow a kiss before a grin
    squeeze the trig--

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    poetvixposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye.
    I wish I may,
    I wish I might
    see America survive this night.
    That once great land…
    Where a hungry child finally sleeps,
    where politicians feed like beasts,
    where babies' futures are gambled away,
    where corporate greed holds sway.
    I wish I may,
    I wish I might
    awake to find it was all just a dream's fright,
    where truth and honor still were alright,
    that place that used to fight the good fight.
    I cross my heart and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye.
    A greater hell awaits those raping the land.
    Stand up America while you still can.

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    Lee Douglasposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye,
    And if in my truth, a lie is found,
    Leave me buried, underground.

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    Becca Lopezposted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye
    No wait I do not wish to die
    For my love had not told a lie
    Now in my eye love is found
    Hoping he will stay around
    Holding me for an enternity
    For love had no certainty

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    terrektwoposted 12 years ago

    Prick your finger it is done,
    The moon has now eclipsed the sun,
    The angel has spread it's wings,
    The time has come for bitter things.

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    smzclarkposted 12 years ago

    but if i do i'll miss my chance to meet a good guy
    and to eat my grandma's blueberry pie
    on second thoughts i might just sigh
    say i'm sorry and goodbye
    i can't deny that it was wrong
    but as it stands we don't live long
    hopefully my friend will say
    actually can you stay?
    i'll forgive you this one time
    as you put so much effort into making up that daft rhyme!!!

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    jessyferari1posted 12 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye... but if i may and if i might tell you how much you mean to me, would u be my friend forever? This is a request and no a lie, but a promise i will be your friend till i die.

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       s85sposted 6 years agoin reply to this

       So many poems, ballads, stories, and songs have been written and composed about the subject of love. From time immemorial romantics, musicians, songsters and poets have entertained their contemporaries and their betters with this type of pleasant rel

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    Cyndi10posted 12 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye,
    wait a minute, I spoke a lie and never really wanted to die.
    but if I may and if I might my heart is open for tonight
    though my lips are sealed and a promise is true
    I won't break my word to you
    So I stuck in my thumb, hoping my feelings would go numb
    But, oh boy, was that dumb
    'Cause that won't make you succumb, not even with my show of aplomb.
    Oh what's the use in blowing a fuse?
    For now, I just thank God eyes come in twos!

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    flikabingposted 12 years ago

    I'll end it with this:
    
    you're my love my only love,
    
    kept in my heart till the end of time,
    
    i'll stay true no matter what,
    
    cross my heart and hope to die.

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    learnloveliveposted 12 years ago

    You said that you loved me, but I just couldn't know. Never wanting worry, I just had to let that go. Now we're here, I'm wanting just to show that no matter what you've said or done your heart is still my home.

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       Jazmyn Tateposted 6 years agoin reply to this

       Im finna cry

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    Goldieloxyposted 11 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die stick a needle in my eye, you left me after 18 years, all alone with kids in tears. I don't know how you can cut and run, I just remember the beach and fun. Stress and life brought you down, I loved the way we danced and we tore up the town. I hope there is a second chance, for true love's kiss and once again to have that sweet romance.

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    hubpages1983posted 10 years ago

    cross my heart and hope to die 
    stick a needle in my eye 
    wait a moment, i spoke a lie 
    i never really wanted to die. 
    but if I may and if I might 
    my heart is open for tonight 
    though my lips are sealed and a promise is true 
    i won't break my word my word to you
    .....
    I'll never forget every thought I had,
    Of me not ever being with you, I knew.

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    jwbensonposted 9 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die;
    So stick a needle in my eye;
    If what I say should be a lie.
    
    My promise is as good as gold;
    It shall not tarnish or grow old;
    And it can't be bought or ever sold.

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    Atya Tasneemposted 8 years ago

    And forever will I think of you
    no matter where you go,
    though I promised not to speak and my lips are sealed ,
    I still imagine you I promised not to leave
    not knowing you would be the breaker,
    and though inside I break every time
    I see u.
    I still promised ,
    to never break a promise....

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    Sonigramposted 8 years ago

    Cross my heart and ...........if I should die before I wake I pray the Lord my soul to take

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    Perspycaciousposted 8 years ago

    Stick a needle in my eye,
    no matter how hard you try,
    I will still see the light.

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    Sakshi Davessarposted 8 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye.
    
    Oh! wait a moment, I spoke a lie
    I never really wanted to die.
    
    This is a life given by the Lord
    Probably the only gift that is precious of all
    
    Be happy and spread happiness for a while
    For there are people actually fighting for their life.
    
    Praise life and value its importance
    Try to live it for the persons it contains.

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    MizBejabbersposted 8 years ago

    Cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye
    No, I won't even try,
    I'll do that when pigs fly

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       MizBejabbersposted 6 years agoin reply to this

       Continued:
       Did I see a pig fly by,
       No, but a doctor
       just stuck a needle in my eye.
       Oh, my!
       A true story, sorry to say
       We all have to eat our words
       Someday.

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    Ben Evansposted 8 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye.
    I spoke a lie
    I never wanted to die.
    
    but if I may and if I might
    my heart is open for tonight.
    Through my lips are a sealed and a promise is true
    I wont break my word my word to you
    
    
    Things are said with no intent
    from out of our mouth they are sent
    My eyes are intact and my heart does beat.
    I will not die being a surreptitious cheat.
    
    So you must trust I must ask.
    It is not an easy task.
    I hope our friendship is steady and true
    That is the reason I would not lie to you.

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    Missy Smithposted 8 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die, stick a needle in my eye, if it bleeds, oh what a scene, you will puke and run from me. I will cackle as I look in the mirror, shame on you, you scary bitch. For all you do is play tricks and laugh as people contort their faces into grotesque masks.

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    Shyron E Shenkoposted 7 years ago

    I Cross my heart and hope to die,
    Stick a needle in my eye
    If to you I ever lie
    Stick a needle in my eye?
    But, I do not mean that literally
    Wanted you to take me seriously
    And I said that metaphorically
    If friends we could no longer be
    ….. it would be
    Liken to a needle in the eye
    Would cause me so much pain
    That it would make me want die
    ____ © Shyron Shenko

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       Shyron E Shenkoposted 6 years agoin reply to this

       I cross my heart and hope to die
       stick a needle in my eye
       If I cannot see then you will know why

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    Amulet Hawkerposted 7 years ago

    cross my heart
    and hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye
    wait a moment,
    I spoke a lie
    I never really
    wanted to die.
    but if I may
    and if I might
    my heart is open
    for tonight
    though my lips are sealed
    and a promise is true
    I won't break my word
    my word to you.
    
    cross my heart
    hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye.
    a secret's a secret
    my word is forever
    I will tell no one
    about your cruel endeavor.
    you claim no pain
    but I see right through
    your words in
    everything you do.
    teary eyes
    broken heart
    life has torn
    you apart
    
    cross my heart
    hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye
    I loved you then
    I love you now
    I'll still love you
    though I'll break my vow.
    I can't hold this secret
    any longer
    it's hurting you
    not making you stronger.
    you're my friend
    so I'll risk your respect
    by hurting you
    I can protect
    I'll save yourself
    since you will not
    you might hate me
    but I'll give it a shot.
    I'm willing to risk
    our bond that we own
    so long as you're safe
    you won't be alone.
    
    cross my heart
    hope to die
    stick a needle in my eye
    break my promise
    tell a lie
    save my friend
    though, maybe it's 'bye.'

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       Glenis Rixposted 7 years agoin reply to this

       I was moved by your words

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    Aamir Vahoraposted 7 years ago

    I crossed my heart and hope to die, stick a needle in my eye
    If that doesn't work,
    Get a bigger needle that can hurt,
    Because dying would give me peace,
    As I lay down in the calm breeze,
    No worries to worry about,
    No folks there to doubt,
    Figments of life flowing through,
    Let Darkness be my only view,
    Who's up for it, Do I have volunteers?
    Let alone I cannot stand my fears,
    I do it again, crossed my heartand hope to die,
    Somebody take my life, as I've no strength to commit suicide.

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    leshthebroposted 7 years ago

    For cross my heart hope to die
    Live and learn my dear my sweet
    As days go by my dear I dream
    Of tommorow, tommorow we meet.

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    Callmeishmaelposted 7 years ago

    Poetry
    
    I cross my heart and hope to die,
    Stick a needle in my eye,
    If ever I thought
    Or could be convinced
    That words like those
    That start this poem
    Are poetry.
    Perhaps proem,
    But to claim
    More than this
    Would be to lie.
    But if it must be evinced
    (that which I here propose)
    I will say that poems are wrought,
    Not from nature unchanged,
    Not from things left the same
    But from things made awry.
    A poem is not an apple,
    But an apple pie.
    
    Call me Ishmael, Dec. 5, 2016

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    Misheto Petrovaposted 7 years ago

    I
    cross
    my
    heart
    and
    I
    hope
    to
    die
    stick
    a
    needle
    in
    my
    eye
    if
    I
    lie
    I
    will
    cry
    I
    cross
    my
    heart
    and
    I
    hope
    to
    die

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    Edmerlyn Geraldeposted 7 years ago

    I cross my heart and hope to die
    Stick a needle in my eye
    But needle's pain can't be compared
    With the pain as i recall happy moments,,
    that we once shared
    
    Ahh..yes, I'm tired of crying over you
    I'll pick a different point of view
    Life goes on as what they say
    But...I'm blinded with love...so,
    I chose to stay..
    
    Stay..and wait..
    For you to come back to my gate
    I don't believe in so called fate
    I'll wait for you..even you are late

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