A Captive of My Mind-The Awakening — by Farah

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   Misbah786posted 23 months ago

   Please take the time to read Farah's beautiful poem.
   
   Here's the link: https://hubpages.com/literature/A-Capti … -Awakening
   
   Thank you!!!
   
   Dear Farah, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your lovely poem. Very well-written and thought-provoking. I really loved it!! Thank you so much for sharing.
   
   Blessings and Love as always!

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   Farah N Huqposted 23 months ago

   Thank you so much, dear sweet Misbah, for sharing this poem and I am delighted to know you enjoyed reading it. Much love and blessings to you dear...

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      Misbah786posted 23 months agoin reply to this

      You are welcome!!!

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      surovi99posted 23 months agoin reply to this

      A wonderful poem in which you successfully liberate yourself and then awaken. A great message here. Thank you for sharing, Farah.
      
      Thank you, Misbah, for sharing Farah's work.

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         Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much, dear Surovi, for your support and appreciation. I am so glad to know that you liked it. Blessings to you always...

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   RozlinMohsinposted 23 months ago

   Wonderful poem, Farah. Well composed. I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing.
   
   Thank you, Misbah for sharing Farah's hub.

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   Farah N Huqposted 23 months ago

   Thank you, dear RozlinMohsin, for your appreciation. This piece is a continuation of “A Captive of My Mind” which I had written a few months ago. The mind is seen as a separate entity in both but in the first poem the mind takes control over the body in a very negative way and the mind-body discord creates tension. In this one, the mind learns how to find peace in a harsh and negative environment and thus gets back in sync with the body to move on harmoniously. I am very happy to know you enjoyed reading the poem. My blessings to you...

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   AliciaCposted 23 months ago

   Farah has included some very effective imagery in her poem. I loved it. The poem matches the title beautifully. Thank you for sharing it, Misbah.

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      Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, dear AliciaC. I am glad to know you found the imagery effective and loved going through it. Stay blessed always.

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   Jodahposted 23 months ago

   This poem finishes on a very positive note, Farah. Of course it was a delight to read your well-crafted words throughout. Blessings to you.
   Thank you for sharing, Misbah.

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      Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, John, for your appreciative words. You have always been a kind and supportive soul. My blessings to you always and yes, thanks again, Misbah, for sharing it.

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 23 months ago

   Hello Farah!
   Beautifully done poem!
   How one can be captive of one's own mind, and also awakened, is well expressed in your poem!
   Thank you for sharing, and thanks to Misbah too!

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      Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, dear Ms. ChitrangadaSharan, for your love and support. I am very happy to know you found this poem expressive and beautiful. Yes, sometimes our mind and body may fail to work in synchrony, leading to a tormenting situation where one may feel stuck, but there is always a way out and it is just a matter of time working on these differences and finding space for peace within yourself despite all the surrounding hardships.
      My blessings to you always.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months ago

   Absolutely beautiful !
   
   This poem shows how we often feel so frustrated we forget that feeling.
   It's great when we find it.
   
   It is indeed a mysterious land
   Where we find peace.
   
   One of your best pieces.   Great job.

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      Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Oh dear, Brenda! That is such a sweet compliment! Thank you so much! I am absolutely delighted to know that you loved it. Yes, it is indeed a mysterious land in our mind where we find that peace we all crave for. Thank you once again. Blessings to you always...

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         Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months agoin reply to this

         You are welcome.
         
         I'm finding glimpses...hopefully I'll find that mysterious land soon.

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            Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

            I sure pray and hope you do, Brenda!

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   Pamela99posted 23 months ago

   I very much enjoyed reading your poem. It gave such an lovely image of s new awakening. It is a very well-crafted poem as well.
   
   It is a beautiful poem Farah!
   
   Thanks for posting Farah's poem Misbah, Love and blessings to both of you.

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      Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much, dear Pamela, for your lovely words! I am very happy to know you loved it. My blessings to you always...

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    ravirajan01posted 23 months ago

    A beautiful poem Farah. I could almost feel the whirlpool of emotions as I read through your lovely words and the intense imagery. Thanks for sharing.
    
    Thanks, Misbah, for sharing Farah's work.

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       Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

       Thank you so much, dear Ravi, for your appreciation and support. I am glad to know you found the imagery effective and intense. My blessings to you always...

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    vidsagsterposted 23 months ago

    Beautiful poem Farah. You bring out the emotions of relief after the awakening from captivity of one's own mind, very well. I enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks Misbah for sharing.

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       Farah N Huqposted 23 months agoin reply to this

       Thank you so much, dear Vidya! Glad to know you enjoyed the poem. Blessings to you always.

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