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You Are In, Or You Are Out--Third Age Poetry

Updated on December 23, 2014

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You are in or you are out...!

That's all love is... about

being happily married for 45 springs,

maybe I can share my story with you my friend...


That's what grandma used to say with pride

She survived my dad for another 25 years or more.

numbers don't really matter anymore

sixty three, for this wanna be writer's soul.


Wife is in the Kitchen right now

fixing our spaghetti with tomato sauce

sure... I did my chores, before typing down here

Sorry for being worried about her


They always ask us on family reunions and encounters

what's the secret of our 'charming' romancing...?

sometimes we answer at the same time, laughing all along

Good food, good chat, a little of imagination, and adding some 'fun'


Like little kids we play the game of life

she looks for me and I look for 'my sweet wife'

taking care of each one... so good, so great!

understanding that our lives must keep hatred at bay


Nothing better than going places together

remembering that sunset that took forever...!

biking my dad's double bike around that shore

getting ourselves soaked, as we sink our feet on wet sand


ten year and ten more, 3 kids were enough!!!

now we have the time of a lifetime, for the two of us

Going back to where we met and kissed

You got it!, Behind that damn Pine tree!


Most of all, we just care for the other one

and waiting in return the love that we've just won

Not hard to advice to new generations

who foolishly get themselves in deep tribulations


Wait, excuse me dear friend, she is calling me now

Fine! Is my turn to close this piece of advice...!

...was about to talk about sex behind our doors

but she cannot wait for me... to try those meatballs


before I leave this is my last advice

clean those toilets seats for your wife

find some roses before making it back home

get her the teddy bear that she always adored...

because you were the man that all along she chose... from her heart.


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    smzclark 5 years ago from cheshire

    I really enjoyed that and it came at a perfect time! Thanks loads :-) ! Voted Up, Beautiful and Useful!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Smzclark! Thanks for your comment. This kind of input keeps us writing for sure.

    LORD

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    Ohhhh Lord.. how nice an sweet.. You wife has to be so proud of you..for being a great man to her.. Clean the toilet seat and buy her roses.. How wonderful my friend.

    I voted way way up

    Blessing my dear.

    Debbie

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Debbie,

    Even though this is a fictional piece. It can relate to many... is a reminder for all of us, that are living already life on the fast lane....Hold it!! I got a text message from HP..!

    LORD

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    Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

    Awwwwww.....shucks! That is awfully nice of you to think of your wife so kindly:)

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Kelly dear, is a fictional story, with so much of true in it. But yeah, sometimes we forget simple things that can make a marriage last. Thanks for your stopping by.

    LORD

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    PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

    Lord,

    This is fictional, and I thought it was you and your wife. Anyway, this couple gets my vote, they are so cute together.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Bobbi

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    Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

    Can we add an "adorable" button, because that's my vote! so charming, Lord! Glad I read this one! :-)

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Thanks Bobbi!

    Yeah! They are having a good time as we speak. They have to get for a medical evaluations as well. I know they are fine, but we do not live forever... amen!

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    We can add it with making certain changes at the html coding. It can be easy as putting that pinterest tag. Thanks for your Words Vicky.

    LORD

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    Susan Holland 5 years ago from Southwest Missouri

    This is so sweet. I love the images of the love the man has for his wife. I especially like the advice at the end about putting the seat down... I hate it when I fall in in the middle of the night. That is a biggy. You won my heart! :-)

    Votes and shared!!

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    Sunnie Day 5 years ago

    Oh Lord you are truely a keeper...cleaning the toilet seat and roses...your wife is a lucky lady. I bet the meatballs were perfect too..A life of love thats what it is all about. I loved this! Thank you.

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    Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

    Great hub! Someone is going to catch you one day and keep you. Really inspiring work! Love it!

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    Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

    Very sweet write Lord! I love it when I see people that are in love after years and years together!

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    kelleyward 5 years ago

    Lord this is sweet! It reminded me of that song on the new Muppet movie when I saw the picture of the tandem bike. It says something like I pedal and you steer. Very sweet!

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    P. Thorpe Christiansen 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

    Awesome. A good marriage is made of a lot of try and a lot of fun. You stated it all very well. We have been at it for 41 years - such a joy to have him. A lovely hub.

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    TENKAY 5 years ago from Philippines

    Love it. Am trying to make our marriage work 'till death do us part'. I guess we might just be successful.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Susan..on a personal side, I had to learn the hard way, to put the darn seat down. Took me 12 months though. The socks were easier, she would get rid of them if they wer not by her laundry basket. Thanks for your stopping by.

    Lord

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hello Sunnie dear,

    Lol! They are doing so well, that I just had to remember their everyday smiling and sharing. And I smile along the way. Life is too short to live it miserably. My blessings to you and my prayers for your son...!

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Tammy,

    You are funny.Lol! Catch me if you can? This piece is based on true events and recreated with a funny side. Thnaks Tammy for stopping by!

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Kelley Ward,

    You are right about the muppets scene. Love can be felt at any age as you know better. Have a nice one.

    LORD

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    schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA

    Absolutely beautiful video and song, best movie, most romantic ever, awesome poem, truly original, totally my taste. 5 stars.

    !!! :) :) awesome!!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Thanks Audrie,

    There is something different about them; divorced was not in their vocabulary back in the days. Hope you have a nice week of inspiration as well.

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    aww! Duffsmom,

    41 years by your side is a real blessing. I wonder if this hub can...of course if can relate to you. Life can be rewarding expend it with someone who really loves you. Glad to hear from you and your experiences.

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    I hear you Tenkay,

    Just do as we did. Imagination and thinking of surprises, eventually your better half will fall for you again...trust me!

    LORD

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    theking2020 5 years ago

    This hub was great, working as a team is the key.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    You are right on the Mile The king2020!

    The risk is bigger than any penny stock and the loss can be substantial if one of the traders in the marriage give up on the commitment.

    LORD

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    Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

    Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Such a loving poem it was a thrilling read from start to finish. Your wife's a very lucky lady. I'm not doing too bad myself with the love of two great guys - my hubby and my handsome cat Sid.

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    picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

    SOOOO nice to read a hub about a loving relationship...one that has weathered the years. Vote up, up and away!!!

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    Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

    What a beautiful piece! Thank you. I have to say that after 25 years, I am still "IN".

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    There you go GypsyRose,

    Your hunny must be lucky too. Latvia and its mornings might keep you together, specially on cold nights...Take Care!

    LORD

    Hi Pickles,

    Glad to have you around. These inspirations keep coming and we share it with our friends. Have a wonderful day!

    LORD

    Morning Dave Mathews,

    So happy for your bliss that after 25 yrs can be shared. You should write about it and give us some advice. Thanks!

    LORD

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    Jennifer Essary 5 years ago from Idaho

    Beautiful! Voted up, awesome, and shared.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Jennifer Esary,

    Your comments are always welcome. ahve a wonderful day.

    LORD

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    Mary Hyatt 5 years ago from Florida

    Even if it is fictional, this poem is a keeper! Too bad all couples don't take your advice. See you around....

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Thanks Mary615,

    you are right on the money. People today, doesn't think about these simple things..Take care friend.

    LORD

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    schoolgirlforreal 5 years ago from USA

    Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    You are welcome SchoolgirlForReal,

    This inspiration comes in pieces, abd the message is woven like a perspiration of life. Thanks for you valuable comments.

    LORD

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