Oh My Pain You Are Making Me Rebellious

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   Jodahposted 3 years ago

   Please read this well-written and touching poem by Misbah
   https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … rebellious

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      ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Well expressed and heart touching poem, Misbah!
      I agree, too much pain and suffering can make a person, rebellious.
      Thank you for sharing this John!
      Happy weekend to both of you.

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you for reading, Chitrangada.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you so much, Di, for your thoughtful and kind response. I'm delighted you found it heart touching.
         
         Take care and keep smiling.
         Happy weekend to you as well.
         
         Blessings and lots of Love!

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Excellently well-crafted and well-composed, Misbah. It is very sad poetry but very much heart-felt. The quote at the end somehow soothes every reader. Thank you for sharing.
      
      Thank you, John, for sharing Misbah's beautiful work.

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks, Rosina.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Rosina, thank you for your warm and lovely comment. I'm glad you like the poem and the quote as well.
         
         Take care and stay healthy. Wishing you a happy weekend and a blessed Ramadan.
         
         Blessings and lots of Love!

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      John, thank you so much for reading and sharing the link. I'm happy you think it's well-written and touching. I always appreciate your kindness, dear friend.
      Take care and stay healthy.
      
      Wishing you a blissful weekend
      
      Blessings always!

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      Venkatachari Mposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, John, for sharing this link. I scrolled through all the feed pages and couldn't find this one for expressing my feelings.
      
      A heart-touching poem, Misbah. It is deeply appealing to my heart. Well expressed with simple lines.

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         Jodahposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Venkat, there seems to be a problem with the feed and notifications recently. Some articles appear, some don’t. Glad you were able to read this one.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Sir, thank you so much for your lovely and kind comment. I'm delighted you found the poem to be heart touching. Your thoughtfulness is much appreciated.
         
         Take care and stay healthy.
         
         Wishing you a great weekend.
         
         Lots of Blessings!!!

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      vidsagsterposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      A heart touching sad poem Misbah. It is true that suffering makes a person rebellious. But one cannot escape from one's fate. True love sometimes conquers all obstacles.Thanks for sharing John.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Vidya, thank you so much for reading and sharing your nice and insightful thoughts. I sincerely appreciate it. Take care and stay happy.
         Blessings and love as always!

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   While this poem is sad it sure touched mu heart Misbah. It is a very well written poem about a tragic event.  Blessings and love for you,
   
   Thanks for posting Misbah's poem John.

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your very kind and beautiful comment, Pamela. I am glad you enjoyed it. Much Gratitude!!
      
      Happy weekend. Stay safe and happy.
      
      Much Love and Many Blessings!!!

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Misbah
   It is so hard when one is hurting.  There never seems to be a way out or any answers.
   She can go on because her king will walk with her everyday.   He's in her heart for eternity.
   
   Take care gal.  This write is sad, but good.
   
   Hugs! 
   Bredz

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your very kind and beautiful comment, Bredz. I truly appreciate your kindness. I am glad you liked it.
      Blessings and Hugs!

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   That is a sad tale, but you told it well, Misbah.  Thanks for sharing her work with us John.

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment, Peggy. Much appreciated, dear friend.
      
      Stay happy and healthy.
      Blessings and lots of Love!

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   ravirajan01posted 3 years ago

   Wonderful poem Misbah.I like the way you managed to tell the story within this very heart touching poem.The words and the flow really touches the reader.THanks for this great write Misbah

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for reading and for your very kind comment, Ravi. I am glad you found it heart touching.
      
      Have a great day ahead.
      
      Blessings!!

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