Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   So she walks through valleys and ponders long and hard
   "Shall I forget thee, my love, and walk on unscarred?"

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      WhiskeyChickposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Imposibilities
      You are branded into my soul
      I can see nothing else
      you
      lips
      mine
      crushing against every memory

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   "Oh God", she wailed, "what are memories for?"
   "if all they do is distance me from the shore?"

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      WhiskeyChickposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Lap it up to crashing waves till no longer
      can you hear their lonely screams of hunger

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      nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      The shore or sea , she is still undecided
      shore she gets safe , sea where they got united
      
      P.S. Cris is getting lovelier! *hint hint*

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         \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         I know tell me about it... just been reading how to get lovelier in ten minutes from one of your hubs,,,,,,

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            nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            I was wondering how Cris is managing it without the makeup! *sigh*

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            Cris Aposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            She traipsed along the shoreline, feeling the foam on her toes
            and stopped for a moment to stare at the prints of her woes

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               nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               Why Cris, I wrote those lines. My inner poet is offended! *not on talking mode for Cris for 10 secs*

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               Cris Aposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               Ooops sorry nazish, I misquoted. Anyway, got it fixed

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                  nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

                  

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   Though distant from the shore, he knew in his heart,
       That his lover and he would never be apart...

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   And so her great love, like all things, came to pass
   The stars came back to life, shimmering like distant glass

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      \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      
      She awakened from this nightmare and realised what she had done,
      
      There must be a way back to her lover and son....

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   She took out a shotgun and pointed to her head,
         If someone dont save her, she will soon be d,,e..a..d

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   Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

   Would that bullet just blast her to kingdom come
   Or would she join him in his space and time in the sun?

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   She pushed the trigger but it seemed to have blocked
   On her compromised motherhood, the whole universe mocked

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   Somewhere in the heavens her lover sighed
   "My son needs her! " , he said while his tears dried

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      nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      One love has to be sacrificed, die or raise her son till
      Should she herself kill or her son's cup with love fill?

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   I just had a moment of 'truth' ... or ... whatever. So I thought, why not continue this poem and stretch it as much as aesthetics would allow and make it the 'longest love poem in the whole world'. And you never know the Guinness Guys might wanna brag about it in their little book. And yes, I am very serious!

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      \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Someone may make a musical and we may all get to meet each other.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    I JUST DONT WANT IT TO EVER END, SO IF YOU WILL HELP I WILL TRY MY BEST TO KEEP IT GOING..... THESE TWO DESERVE TO BE TOGETHER FOREVER DONT YOU THINK..
    
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    have to go out now, speak later love Brenda x

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       nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       True Branda, lets take a 'solemn-two-vow' on it! . You have my support for keeping it going on and on !

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          \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          Maybe just maybe you could persuade others to help, it gets a bit hard on our own don't you think....

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             nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

             I guess we have some other people's unspoken support. We could make sure that whenever there's , say one day's idleness at this topic then we could jump in and carry it forward. Also,I see that when this poem started many people were eager to contribute but now that passion is fading away.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    The gun disapears from her hand without a trace,
      She catches sight of this person who has half a face...

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       nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          Could it be an angel to reverse time
          The schism is nothing for now but mime

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          \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          I think someone is just playing hard to get, let's see...
          p.s. i like you....

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             nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

             Lol, why don't you take the lead from here?
             P.S. I like you back

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Angels hovering around in the air
            Helping the rift that appeared to repair.....

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    The rift is growing into an abyss
    a lifetime apart , under a great mist

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She takes her place back alone in the sand,
      and dreams of her lover with pen in his hand....

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Writing love letters in the sand so wet
    The tide hasn’t come in and erased it as yet

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Ethereal sand castles or eternal love bonds
    Stronger they get , frailer their beset becomes

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Please, she cries rescue me from this nightmare alone
      Show me a sign, that my lover has not flown.....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Heavens bend down to answer her plea
    "He's with you look around, he could never flea"

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Lo, from the mist, there arises a form
    Her dead lover is back - and she thought he had gone!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She reaches to touch him, he disapears into the mist
    Was it just a mirage, how she longs for his kiss...

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    Choke Franticposted 15 years ago

    And so on the beach, she sits all alone
    Into misery's depths she has been thrown.

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    but despite the sorrow, tears and unending ache
    she knows he will be back, her pain he will take

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    Choke Franticposted 15 years ago

    She longs for the day that she'll see him again,
    Though she knows it will come, she doesn't know when.

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But she accepts her fate, to wait and wait some more
    for the promise of paradise burns bright in her core

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    Choke Franticposted 15 years ago

    With delicacy and passion she holds onto this hope,
    The view of its brightness, it allows her to cope

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Though paradise seems so far from her now,
        She waits patiently for him, she has made a solemn vow...

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    Choke Franticposted 15 years ago

    No other man will she ever love,
    She'll wait for him to return from above..

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    A tickle here, a familiar breath there
    That heart stopping touch, her lips snare

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    A blank  canvas and paints, and her easel in place
       She paints from memory the contours of his face....

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But none would come, try hard as she might
    Only her heartbeat, on this starless night

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    He watches from afar, feeling the beating of her heart
        Guides her hand to the canvas, and directs her work of art

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    A tickle here, a familiar breath there
    That heart stopping touch, her lips snare
    
                !

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But the hand can only conjure what the eyes can see
    So the brush dropped, the canvas burnt without glee

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    He has left her, she knows it, the fire it burns high,
              The canvas a memory, all that remains is desire.

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    But a spark kindles in her some hope
    Even a speck is enough to help her cope

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She takes a brush, and hour by hour,with vivid colours
       paints a lotus flower............

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    With a knife she cuts her skin
    The gashes to her eyes are akin

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Then with blood from memory his portrait she paints
    When it’s done it’s so lifelike, she swoons in a faint

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    the spell brought her back to places and faces
    the past catching up with her heart that races

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Lo, his newer life lives by her blood
    He's but a vampire, would this her love flood?

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Stars tell that he was once the king of her empire
    Heavens whisper, what now when he's become a vampire?

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Joined at last together, in blood their love story they write
    The twilight twosome is in a perpetual state of love bites

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    but soon for our lovers the sun in the sky ascends
    into sleep they must part as the moon descends

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    The unbearable lightness of being only in the night
    To live, to love away from the harsh sunlight

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    Charia Samherposted 15 years ago

    Wherein nobody could see, nobody could flee
    Their hearts amidst roaring glee

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    Eaglekiwiposted 15 years ago

    Moonlight dancing upon shimmering waters
    Suspended by invisible strands of my love

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    My love seems to have stopped space & time's continuum
    He beams - knowing not what lies underneath the premium

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Nature now demands of them for the disturbance
    They must but now deliver for a sacrifice!

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         The vampires have now flown,
         The lover she is left once more confused and all alone....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Up above the star lit sky, some frenzy goes with some sly
    Below the canopy they lie , still for the fear they may die

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       lisafwg01posted 15 years agoin reply to this

       In the silent darkness they wait,
       knowing all too well their fate.
       
       Aching for the solace of undisturbed sleep,
       Blood-laced tears they weep.

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    breakfastpopposted 15 years ago

    Be strong, its your life,
    Fight hard, bear the strife

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       marisuewritesposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       weep if you must, then rise from the pain
       new paths await, hope erases the stain

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          J.Stumpposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          but it has been said
          there is a time for tears
          and a time for war

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