Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   so together once more erased from all pain,
     the beach, below the stars has become their domain.....

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   and the moist sand under the velvet sky's glistening
   as if the stars have come down, in silenece, spying

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   At last the two now fade into the moist sand,
       And rejoicing is heard throughout all the land...

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   marisuewritesposted 15 years ago

   Wise now, because all know
   that life is a circle
   
   of beseeching, repeating,
   celebrating the flow

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   Darknlovely3436posted 15 years ago

   Is this the fall? Autumn leaves,
   Golden colours, yellow and brown.
   I long for your touch,
   I waited so long,

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   Her symphony mesmerizes the petals and waves
   the petals go to sleep, the waves beset

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   she is radiant now, the stars still look on...
   reunited at last with her lover, and son.

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   But what is it ? it doesn't allow her a closure
   A lover , a son , does she need to look closer?

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   A symbol of peace, in the shape of a dove,
   Arrives on the scene, sent from god above....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    The dove begins to mean a symbol of mockery to her
    With shove of her hand she dismisses it all

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She will go on her way, and ignore the dove
       For she has discovered an end to the peace and her love

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       Kushal Poddarposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Love is ash, if you turn blind;
       love is lost, if you pick up
       the blind sword, meant to draw blood.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    The moon and the stars, the couple on the  shore..
    It has all come to naught right through to the core......

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    Kushal Poddarposted 15 years ago

    Sun has a habit of enlivening those
    who does not want to live.

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    and strips the land of shadows and fog, swiftly
    like a lover's breath when loving knowingly

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    cashmereposted 15 years ago

    Things possible in the light of day
    bring happiness in the heart's sway

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    So where are we going now with this rhyme..
    Love still the title, though lost in time...

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    To twilight zone where love plays in the shadows
    Let's leave 'em alone to drown in their sweet sorrows!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Their grieving is pitiful, they both feel alone...
      But it seems their differences they cannot atone...

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    For his heart shattered when he saw her leave
    She doesn't love him, that now she truly believes

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    For love is the greatest disloyal being
    Now its yours, then - it had never been

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    Capable Womanposted 15 years ago

    but for them who've no choice but to follow the laws
    that forever commit them to their common cause
    must run wild through the streets of their own hometown
    ...the lasting impression, this day that we drown.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    love and hate emotions so strong...
      He clings to the feelings, to him she belongs

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Where the line between love and hate merges
    His definition of love for her diminishes

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Spiralling through space to an unknown zone...
      The lover from the beach and her man have flown

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Her son looks up at the left traces
    how scarred for life, he's left in nemesis

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    scarred but sure from this life alone,
        he will contact the couple in their unknown zone....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    The euphoria she feels with the new one seems incomplete
    A sigh ... that scream .... is all what she hears

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    The euphoria she feels with the new one seems incomplete
    A sigh ... that scream .... is all what keeps her beam

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    The sea is calm tonight
    Her son has lost the fight

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    She brushes 'them' off and saunters off to lands unknown
    leaving 'them' behind for one she for only a while had known

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    But in her mind and her heart, she feels a great lack,
       And starts thinking of ways to get them both back......

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Is her sin but forgivable?
    Would she again be lovable?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She longs for her lover to reach out to her now,
      She has mended her ways, and remembers her vow....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    He is but nothing like before
    The love story has now not three but four ...

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          Out on her own, she is content at last
          A new start to life, she forgets the past......

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    Jacodyposted 15 years ago

    hearts and tears to
    be mended here much longer before...

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    Research Analystposted 15 years ago

    the sun breaks through the morning sky and...

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       nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Go back to square one ... and see the rules. This isn't the ongoing story thread :p.

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    In a woodedn box, she puts all her memories to rest
    And stows it in a lilac scarf like some treasure chest

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Never to be opened, never to be seen
       She starts again, with her most recent dream...

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    She dreams a dream where rivers flow from the sun
    where eyes talk, hearts walk, and there's no pain

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    where the sun shines day after day,
       and the only sound is children at play........

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    She basks in the delight of children laughing
    No love to scar her, no man there chaffing

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    vkent7441posted 15 years ago

    like the sound of raindrops falling
    she hears the sounds of new love calling.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Though he calls both night and day,
      Our lover is determined on her own to stay

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    She dreams never to wakeup; falls into a deep coma
    doesn't wakeup even when her son calls her 'moma'

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    and her x lover now calls her name,
    wants her back, but she's tired of the game....

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    sam91posted 15 years ago

    But dreams are just a wishing season
    Like this one too has no real reason.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    no real reason, but managing to rhyme
       and we have kept this going for a very long time

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    sam91posted 15 years ago

    the lover knows this too,- not in part. for he has traced his words across her heart.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    like it or not they remain forever
      and somewhere, some place they are together

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    sam91posted 15 years ago

    And they listen to the silken sounds of heaven, where from the silence comes a serenade.

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