Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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   Artisan Walkerposted 15 years ago

   I sat back then, to ponder, on different times, those that are now over ...
   When you and I would run through fields, throw ourselves down, and roll in the clover ...

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      Eaglekiwiposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Fresh joy floods my heart
      I close my eyes to watch
      Lilacs dance upon my mind

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         Artisan Walkerposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         When we are apart
         There are no thoughts to hatch
         just to sit and watch the time

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            Eaglekiwiposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Time where does it go
            Is it with you my love
            Moving Unmoving
            Held Captive in My mind..

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   reggieTullposted 15 years ago

   For the Mind is a Dark and Cavernous Place
   Where these Thoughts get Lost deep within its Space

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   Mighty Momposted 15 years ago

   Reality seeping, her brain feels the chill
   Her heart aches with longing, ne'er to refill

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   Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

   Shut the door on Reality her instincts all say
   The world of make-believe is good – let’s keep it that way!

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   nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

   Her make believe world made her merry-go
   Little did she know that he had died long ago

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   And his death went quietly like a stream
   That surged and ebbed, gone with her dream

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   Eaglekiwiposted 15 years ago

   All thats left is a run-down monument
   Of a life ,lived , loved now gone

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   And so she wept and wailed at the moon
   For a love no more and gone too soon

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      nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Alas! the moon mourned too, seeing her plight
      Looking at her, what heart could bask in delight?

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   Cris Aposted 15 years ago

   And so she roamed the moonless earth for an eternity and a day
   Walking east, flying west, leaving her footprints and tears astray

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She carried his photograph, and mourned for his love
       And the moon was no more, though she still looked above...

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But the stars that she saw have lost their glitter
    And she dwelled and suffered in the morning after

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Sitting on the beach pen and paper in hand,
          with her head in the clouds and her toes in the sand,

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But her hand won't move, not an inch with the pen
    As her thoughts wander off to him again and again

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She remembered his paintiings,of flowers and trees,
      His poetry of love and of the falling of leaves.........

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    And of the times spent away from the world
    Moments of sweet love that torridly unfurled

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Moments they wuld never again share,
      She wiped away her tear, ran her fingers through her hair

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       all my family have just descended on me, at such a moment help....

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Remembering those autumn leaves falling to naught
    Would memory’s leaves be totally forgot?

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    She asked and she feared for she knows memories dim and darken in time
    Oh God, she whispered, why do things happen with no reason nor rhyme

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    If only rhythm and rhyme and the beat of harmony
    Pervaded all of life and made it like it ought to be
    
    
    thread out again from the woodwork?

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    But like all else in this world she thought
    she is a just a pawn, in a web caught
    
    
    
    yes, i was father damien this time

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Sadness engulfs her, and she silently prays
        Recalling his tenderness, his gentle embrace

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    A tangled web of time, space and dimension
    And any move just leads to more frustration
    
    

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Frustration of heart, frustrastion of mind
    And the girl on the beach, and her lover so kind....

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    She walked as delicately as her frail body passed
    Passed away; bit by bit,little by little , shard by shard

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She could not die, for the love of their child,
        Made her sit up and think though her thinking was wild

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Her soul, half present in heaven, half on earth
    Her lover echoes on one set, on the other her beget

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    She wondered when reality and fantasy merged
    Another life now when their love song was a dirge?

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    All the realities faded, all her fantasies vanished
    When from her lover or child, she was asked to one but banish

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Her reply was resounding, no she wailed
        I will not leave this earth, I will be stay with my child

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       oops
            Her reply was resounding, No she wailed
            I will not leave this earth, I will stay with my child

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    Earth shook from its course, stars dimmed in contemplation
    How would a lover with a mother, reside in competition?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Competition too much, she would never win...
       The mother, the lover, the echoes of sin.........

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    No sin but love was this,
    her memory of that first kiss

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    A phantom lover could the theme for an opera be
    A child now was a full time reality

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    Strings herald the morning’s newborn,
    A child born to the rapture of poetry

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    For how could the young mother leave him, in the realm of love to be bold
    The child resembled too much him, in the face of reality he wasn't even forty days old!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    The boy has now become a man.
        Resembling his father so.......

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    Hendrix Followerposted 15 years ago

    For until the night they await, there hearts enticed and intertwined between one anothers pleasant life

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    From foot to crown, there's not a line lost
    It's her lover again, her heart shall unfrost

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    For love won with its might , heavens this celebrated
    Above she many thanks sent, as her lover got reincarnated

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She watched him undress,saw the hole in his sock,
       Her heart missed a beat, she went into deep shock

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    In an instant her mind traveled back to that time
    When he kicked off his shoes, whispering, ‘You are mine!’

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    The memory of a love long gone,
    replaced by her needle as she begins to mend.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    HELP SOMEONE.......

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    kicked of his shoe and drew her near,
    her mind confused, she felt so full of fear

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       Cris Aposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       but the dream escapes and eludes her once more
       he is gone, lost, not a even a scent in her core

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          nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          His memories, so peculiar elude her very core
          until a wisp so familiar hits her to the bore

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    Klnikstaposted 15 years ago

    that she went and ran home to her mothers house where she saw...

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    Research Analystposted 15 years ago

    Poetry will always be a art that has different interprentations.

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    Tom Cornettposted 15 years ago

    her blond hair and ear got caught in the door

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    She knows he is near her, as she struggles to write,
      He helps her, he guides her through the long darkest night.

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    Awake, there is not a trace of his existence
    Asleep, it’s strange how he how he fills her with his presence

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    reggieTullposted 15 years ago

    A shake of the head and a trembling within
    She quivers and quakes realizing her sin.

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