Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   enchanting and pleasant, to both of their ears,
      they think of time spent together throughout many years

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      alekhouseposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      Lets get back on track:
      
      
      They bask in bygone memories of moments shared before.
      They speak of starry canopies that stretched along the shore.
      
      And capturing those moments, the years dissolve away
      and meld their lives together, a seamless pair today.

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   sam91posted 15 years ago

   years that saw words in their missing, and fatefully blended into oneness everlasting.

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      guidebabaposted 15 years agoin reply to this

      I’m lost with this thread!
      All I was looking was few Dollars for my Bread !!!

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         \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         maybe go to the beginning it is supposed to be a love story, but it has died a death and been resurrected loads of times, it is suposed to be going in Guiness Book Of Records......

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            nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

            Died a death? Why wasn't I invited to the funeral?

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               \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

               oops sorry, i mean the romance died a death, then as I said it was resurrected usually by you......... I must add

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   No talk of death or dying, or love that has gone astray
     These two are back together, on this glorious sunny day......

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   sam91posted 15 years ago

   no more clouds of sadness silvered in gray, or memories drawn from prayers that all men fear to say.

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   words of love are spoken in a beautiful rhyme
     engraved on their hearts until the end of time

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   sam91posted 15 years ago

   They sit and watch star-shine float on air, and their hearts beat with the stars' twinkling flair.

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   And the moon appears, as they sit on the shore,
     And there love is growing more and more.........

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   sam91posted 15 years ago

   Their longing whisper in the silent breeze,  and spreads all over the golden seas.

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   \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

   spills onto the shore, and the golden sand
      where the couple walk together, now hand in hand.

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    marriedwomanposted 15 years ago

    She lay her head on his shoulder
    and slowly he pull her down to one corner

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    Cris Aposted 15 years ago

    that corner of heaven under the sheltering sky
    a place that only exists between June and July

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    with sweltering heat of their passion
    even the sun shies away in his mansion

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    One month in twelve is all they have got
    The rest of the year they're in a time warp

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    So best make good use of this place whilst it lasts
       For we all know how quickly the months can fly past.....

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       guidebabaposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       ... Yes, I am making good use of this place !
       Publishing Hubs and Making $$$s.... I just love the taste !!!

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    sam91posted 15 years ago

    ...The night is now over,-morning wakes to a faint rustling of fallen leaves...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Sharing some chocolate, a fun sized mars,
        They lie together contented under the stars.....

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    Lying staring at the night filled sky
       Ouch a wasp stung my eye

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       Eaglekiwiposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       As the tears roll down my cheeks
       Im reminded that Friday is the best day of the week!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    friday, saturday, sunday too,
      alone all weekend in their own rendez - vous...

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    fierycjposted 15 years ago

    ...time meaningless and without void, even as the abyss...

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       \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

         try again two lines and they must rhyme, come on I know you can do it....... did you get my message

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          fierycjposted 15 years agoin reply to this

          oops, didnt read the rules.
          They leapt into the abyss...flying into emptiness.
          Got your message. I replied again.

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    no abyss just paradise,
         just standing and looking in each others eyes

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    now i feel a sense of lust,
    having her now is a must

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       Drew Breezzyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       but behind closed doors who can you trust
       
       I try and fight the feeling but my heart beat thrust

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    scheinandrasposted 15 years ago

    That is why I need to rush
    Find the right one, don't hide in bush

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    The lovers in this rhyme have found each other...
    Today one is working, and one is with mother....

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       guidebabaposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       I am part-1 of the lover !
       ... Looking for the other part.

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       nazishnasimposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       When a hot baby sitter arrives
       Seeing her , the stay-at-home one barely survives!

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    you flatter yourself..... o.k everyone, who are the two lovers in this rhyme.......
    
    well perhaps you are, who do you want to be the other one?

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       guidebabaposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Well.....

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    come on kiss and tell

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    sam91posted 15 years ago

    Am I losing self, i said, or rewriting words i should have said?

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    shall we get back on course now.......
    This is a  love story ...... we are trying to keep it going
    You have to write two lines that rhyme like this:
       
         She walked along the beach today
         Her lover, with here every step of the way

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    Tom Cornettposted 15 years ago

    Ooops he says...could you pick that up?
    Wow sixteen and a double D cup!

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       Drew Breezzyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       (hahaha wow)
       
       wow sixteen and a pear shaped rear
       
       hey lil missy how bout you come right here

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    then jump up and down and do a twirl...
    
    oh my god i'm gonna hurl

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       Drew Breezzyposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       haha
       
       can you really believe this girl
       
       shes half my age but I need this girl

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    So he sprays his breath and smooths his hair,
    Only to discover she is no longer there

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    "oh no" he said "where has she gone"?
    
    I intended on having some kinky fun

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    nazishnasimposted 15 years ago

    sixteen may go, what does he care
    hottest chick BP when now's here!

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    BP stare's into my eyes
    
    oh my god is that your thigh

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    "No that's my butt, under your hands so strong,
    Kiss my lips, let's get it on."

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       Eaglekiwiposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Daylights almost here the magic charm will soon wear off,
       so quick I dont wanna be seen wigless, and my leg screwed off

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    So make your move,before I bust,
    I shed my clothes, with hungering lust.

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    diplessposted 15 years ago

    I gently kiss your soft tender lips
    and take hold of those wiggling hips

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    Bringing me unto his paradise
    a feeling deep within,
    Naked to his loving eyes
    caressing me with sin.

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    kmackey32posted 15 years ago

    I got this one!!
    
    
    As I pull down his whitey tightys
    I see the big almighty...

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       blondepoetposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       ROFL I am waiting for inspiration then I will add to this

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    "Holy blazes I've struck gold,
    Come into my room..it's cold".

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 15 years ago

    Inside the haven of peace they created a calm
       and promised each other they would come to no harm....

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    I am burning inside, a torch of fire,
    Burning fuel of passion, for you are my desire.

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    Gordon Hamiltonposted 15 years ago

    The fire causes aching, my heart she is breaking,
    My life breath she's taking, dull embers I'm raking...

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    A moment so fleeting,
    a beat of the heart and it fades,
    My heart will break,
    but I care not.
    To have you once for courage,
    and for my soul's sake.
    
    (sorry for multible lines, I was in the moment, it's all BP's fault)

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       blondepoetposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       lol

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    I see your hands on my skin,
    I want and need you to do more,
    The passionate look you give me,
    Tells me heaven is in store.

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    I look deep in your eyes,
    And I see heaven there inside,
    You make me feel so beautiful,
    What I feel for you I cannot hide.

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    I feel your need against my thigh,
    I know you will fulfill every wish,.
    We were made to fit together,
    And all it took was a look and a kiss

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    At last our love is one,
    along with our bodies filled with need.
    The motion is mild,
    although our hearts pound,
    with the desire for alecrity.
    
    A moment suspended in time,
    above earth and founded in heaven.
    This our last goodbye,
    brougt forth by our seperate lives.
    
    (BP! see what you did? lol)
    
    so much for line by line...how about stanza by stanza?

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       blondepoetposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       I am just getting going no goodbyes yet lights camera action, So much for this two line regulations here LMAO

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    blondepoetposted 15 years ago

    Their lips meet in soft kisses,
    Their tongues begin passion's war.
    Forgotten now, the outside world.
    All is here, behind this door.
    
    They stare into each other's eyes
    And gasp as ecstasy unreels,
    And tangles them in a lover's knot
    That every answer reveals.
    
    She rides him faster, even then,
    To hear his wondrous sighs.
    She shows him all the delights
    She has between her womanly thighs.
    
    Like beasts of old they become,
    Riding with desire,
    Only resting their throbbing bodies
    When sated by their fire.

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    Shalini Kagalposted 15 years ago

    hey this is great - mind if the rest of us sit back and watch...and cheer of course!

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       blondepoetposted 15 years agoin reply to this

       Sure Shalini better get a fan hahaha

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    trooper22posted 15 years ago

    The embers burn with heat undiminished,
    a fire once again builds,
    brought to life by passion's breath.
    Soon the motion begins anew.
    
    Tumultuous crescendo a distant promise
    as the chorus of lust breaks across
    glistening bodies,
    cresting and ebbing with every breath they take.

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