Let's Write A Poem Together! Line by Line,

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  1. Darknlovely3436 profile image79
    Darknlovely3436posted 10 years ago

    Only time will tell,those two hearts,is
    starting to beat as one, under,this sunny,April Morn!!
    and the heart only knows that heart wants!!..

  2. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    Who are these two, these lovers, so prematurely parted?
    They seem familiar, both of them, who Fate has chose to martyr

  3. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    The girl exotic, tantalizing, wearing a bikini
    Yet strong of body and of mind -- could it really be... Shalini??!!

    1. profile image0
      The Lonely Hubberposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      But how could love come in one name?
      When's it's all of us and none, the same?

      1. roastedpinebark profile image61
        roastedpinebarkposted 10 years agoin reply to this

        For lives be yet so intertwined
        May just leave a soul behind

        1. Cris A profile image58
          Cris Aposted 10 years agoin reply to this

          And what then of the souls if untrelissed
          A kiss in the air not on a lover's lips?

          Shalini - u lookin for moi? cool

  4. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    Her counterpart, a poet deep, mysterious yet schizo
    "love me" "hate me" "fade to black" he makes the stanzas fit so!

  5. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    Sorry Cris -- I got a little carried away:-). MM

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    jjrubioposted 10 years ago

    Longing for each other's touch,
    a hand, a kiss,
    it means so much.
    A loving and tender, warm embrace,
    A love that  even time cannot erase.

  7. Darknlovely3436 profile image79
    Darknlovely3436posted 10 years ago

    They have found what is real;
    They are not pretender;
    The Magic is real, so be true to
    our feelings, its always knows best.
    And they will have laughter,each day
    of their life;

  8. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    MM you are hilarious I’m rolling on the floor
    Haven’t seen young Cris around – you’ve scared him off for sure!



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  9. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    Whew! He's back!

    http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-happy110.gif

  10. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    A soul alone is not a soul loved
    Incomplete, not full, an apple halved

  11. profile image0
    The Lonely Hubberposted 10 years ago

    So what does one do if the other one fled?
    Would its life end after all the tears are shed?

  12. profile image0
    jjrubioposted 10 years ago

    no longer together
    they are incomplete,
    without the other,
    life is obsolete,
    The longer they are apart,
    the pain only damages more inside their heart!

  13. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    The poem, like their love, grows word by word
    Fueled by distance, persistence, undeterred

  14. AEvans profile image76
    AEvansposted 10 years ago

    marking a void in their lives,
    it feels like someone has cut with a knife,

    1. accofranco profile image81
      accofrancoposted 10 years agoin reply to this

        Knife so sharp it could slice a rod, a rod so hard like the broomstick yet, i can't feel their toughness.

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    blograngposted 10 years ago

    it becomes a very good poem

  16. profile image0
    nazishnasimposted 10 years ago

    For like most love stories love is killed in the end
    Killed by a knife, a word , a look , or a little thing

    1. accofranco profile image81
      accofrancoposted 10 years agoin reply to this

        Love can only be loved by love, while hate can...

    2. Cris A profile image58
      Cris Aposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      But still, like all lovers do, they pray and pray
      for fate to be kinder, and make their love stay

      1. accofranco profile image81
        accofrancoposted 10 years agoin reply to this

        Yet, cupid must play its part though, love must love...

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    nazishnasimposted 10 years ago

    The stars, the birds , the bugs wait for the surmise
    Would the time come when our love will again rise?

  18. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    But still like the sun, shall love set, too?
    Oh I musn't dream of things that ring so true!

  19. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    The setting sun is nothing but an illusion that we see
    A sunset here is sunrise there – when viewed in totality

  20. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    So true, my fair one, so true! But my heart has no wings!
    It shall die of suns unseen and other sad little things

  21. reggieTull profile image61
    reggieTullposted 10 years ago

    For Love Sings in the Wind in the Echo of the Chime
    It Blossoms and Grows over the Eternity of Time...

  22. Mighty Mom profile image86
    Mighty Momposted 10 years ago

    Enough of these echos, these blossoms, this sadness!
    Suns rising and setting -- it all seems like madness!

    The lovers grow restless, what's left to be said?
    Lives looping endlessly, they'd rather be dead.

    1. Darknlovely3436 profile image79
      Darknlovely3436posted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Another Romeo and Juliet, another senseless death,
      Too much, love they have for each other,can't be ended
      by death, Love like this have to be patient with time;
      And it can't retake, or rewind,
      ,

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        nazishnasimposted 10 years agoin reply to this

        Consumed by passion,demise through loyalty

        Our love's fate seems to have ended in totality

  23. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    Will love yet again live through death
    and see a new day with its last breath?

  24. reggieTull profile image61
    reggieTullposted 10 years ago

    Through Death the Lovers' Souls Merge to the Source of One
    While Love Warms the Hearts of Others like an emotional Sun

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    The Lonely Hubberposted 10 years ago

    A story that all lovers know, and long been foretold
    Love divine shall overcome even the cruelest cold

  26. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    The cold of death, of separation – can there be greater regret?
    Despite the rosy coloured dreams, there are no answers yet!

  27. profile image0
    The Lonely Hubberposted 10 years ago

    But what is death or separation but a momentary respite
    For hearts to cool down, like journeymen in the dead of night

  28. profile image0
    nazishnasimposted 10 years ago

    Mourn thy love, O lovers in cold death
    For thou could but were untrue to thee instead

  29. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    Untrue I was not oh dear heart
    If I were then let life depart

  30. AEvans profile image76
    AEvansposted 10 years ago

    Let The Words Of Love,
    Part From My Lips,
    Never No More,
    As I Walk Out The Door...

  31. Eaglekiwi profile image75
    Eaglekiwiposted 10 years ago

    How can the sky look the same
    the birds sing the same song
    when my world has changed
    and memories flood my mind

  32. Darknlovely3436 profile image79
    Darknlovely3436posted 10 years ago

    And my heart is uncertain of my future, with you:
       Yet, standing here, your magnetism pulled me closer;
        My knee felt  so weak,as you reach for my hand.

  33. profile image0
    The Lonely Hubberposted 10 years ago

    Oh heart of darkness, heart of light
    overcome this tempest, and melt the night

  34. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    The twilight zone just ekes its in-betweeness into lovers’ psyches
    Nor light, nor dark, just minds suspended in the space that no one likes

  35. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    But still a space of their own, and so in silence they dwell
    surreal, ephemeral, timeless, like their gods' wishing well

  36. AEvans profile image76
    AEvansposted 10 years ago

    That their passion for each other,
    Burns hot like an open flame,

  37. reggieTull profile image61
    reggieTullposted 10 years ago

    As the wind of their souls caress and touch
    swirling and twirling – spinning dervishes as such

  38. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    If only they were granted Three Wishes, what then?
    Would those coins in that Wishing Well bring a fairytale end?

  39. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    But fate's not wrote until the day's bitter end
    better leave to chance what the coins cannot mend

  40. imadork profile image78
    imadorkposted 10 years ago

    There once was a man from Nantucket...

  41. reggieTull profile image61
    reggieTullposted 10 years ago

    But what if fate is a destined chance
    then our sweet dervishes will continue to dance

  42. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    Fair Chance thou art to Destiny enjoined
    To Nantucket we’ll go, with whirling coin


    big_smile

  43. profile image0
    nazishnasimposted 10 years ago

    The coin whirled and whirled at Nantucket
    Like our fate , it too has been bucketed*

    * Finance term which means taking the opposite side (to the customer's order).

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      nazishnasimposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      I sure have this thread alienadted with my finance-giberish. *extends apologies*. Let's get back on track:

      Seeing the poetry humdrum going around their lives
      Towards the exit, the lovers make their beelines

      big_smile

  44. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    without, not even a hint of trepidation
    they scurry, aglow in their union

  45. Shalini Kagal profile image61
    Shalini Kagalposted 10 years ago

    Will scurrying around in their limited dimension
    Enable them to experience their true emotions?

  46. Guru-C profile image77
    Guru-Cposted 10 years ago

    What would they feel if they realized
    Standing still would accelerate time?

  47. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    perhaps not even a scent of regret
    for time's erased when love had beset

    1. profile image0
      nazishnasimposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      Time looses its track when love besets
      My Love, lets with this, the world, we forget

  48. socio-literature profile image61
    socio-literatureposted 10 years ago

    Dear friends....Welcome to this creative and transformative world of poetry,I want to share my poetic ideas with you...

    Poem     Title:Point of Infinity.

    Soul is searching for something..
    Sound of unidentifiable person.
    Echos in the wall of heart.
    And reflects back to heaven and you.
    The search of wandering lamb
    ends in the path of infinity.
    Heap of ash on one side
    the rising Phenix on the other
    The strength of blood forgives
    the deeds of dirty wilderness
    The drops of water springs on earth
    and fumes when creation germinates
    Star way leads the kings
    to the truth of east
    Greenish farmyard smiles
    like an innocence of a child.
    The hunger,the grains and
    the fruits of satisfaction
    will all meet at the point
    of poles of uncertainity
    Some called it fate
    others named it truth
    Few blames it as foolishdeeds
    But all rolls in the Wheels of life...

    With great hope and optimism...
    GEORGE VARGHESE,MSW 24.04.09

  49. lindagoffigan profile image60
    lindagoffiganposted 10 years ago

    The two of us love everlasting with no regrets
    Together enthralled in our winding storm as sun sets

  50. Cris A profile image58
    Cris Aposted 10 years ago

    And I shall love thee once, twice, thrice
    I shall never tire, even if life be the price

 
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